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OBSCURE HALF FOUR THING RESPONSE COLLECTIVE

No More Lonely Hearts!

E Left please

Big version

No More Lonely Hearts!

Here's the right part for O

Here it is complete

And here's in bige

No More Lonely Hearts!

Dibs on R left

And here's the big one

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Right here is a good example of a sentence that should be split up into multiple sentences. Commas are short pauses, yes. However, the end-of-sentence punctuation, (ie: periods, exclamations, and question marks) provide a bit more breathing room. Literally. One trick is to try and say what you wrote, and notice where you pause. That sentence might come out a little more like...

Oh, I think I get the idea more like now. I really do struggle lot when using periods and commas, that tip of diving where you would pause seems so obvious now. I hope now that I know this I won't be as rambly when writing things down or in this case abuse commas so much when I don't need to.


In an unknown dimension where the only sure thing is pain, a small bird boy named Picore has finally had enough. Countless days of insomnia has caused Picore to snap. Now, in order to ensure everyone in Dolores, especially him, can rest, he'll have to finally get rid of God.

You'll have to set deep into the palace where God, himself, is said to reside. Obviously, it's not that simple, for there's a long way to get to him, and tons of creatures who think of your species as easy pickings. Are you determined enough to do what's "right" and end of the suffering of the world? Maybe you'll even find out how it all got so bad?

...this would be my slight revision to the main portion of your description.

Oh, I think I'll definitely use this one, thank for helping me Marrend. uwu

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The only thing I am kinda of hesitant on the description is the use of You since I don't really want people to put themselves in the shoes of my characters, they're either like too extravagant and do weird things or they're like Satan in flesh so I'd rather not do that, and like yeah I might be like custom to put like the player for ref but I think I might have to change that little more

In an unknown dimension where the only sure thing is pain, a small bird boy named Picore has finally had enough. Countless days of insomnia has caused Picore to snap, now in order to ensure everyone in Dolores, especially him, can rest, he'll have to finally get rid of God.

You'll have to set deep into the palace where God, himself, is said to reside. Obviously, it's not that simple, for there's a long way to get to him, and tons of creatures who think of your species as easy pickings. Are you determined enough to do what's "right" and end of the suffering of the world? Maybe you'll even find out how it all got so bad.

Douleur is a short RPG, inspired mainly by the likes of Space Funeral, OFF and Yume Nikki, the latter of those two being the main inspirations for the game's art style. The main gameplay consists of turn based battles, simple puzzle solving, and a little bit of exploration towards the end.


-Not the exact exact thing but I hope this is better, I usually tend to use more commas since to me it all connects, so maybe that's like an issue on me.

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Darn I thought this time I'd actually would of made a good description of the game without spoiling things, tho maybe it is a little too vague

The name of the game is Douleur, also might of been a little redundant with the suffering and PAIN

In an unknown dimension where the only sure thing is suffering and PAIN, a small bird boy has finally had enough, countless days of insomnia has caused poor Picore to finally snap and take a decision, in order to ensure everyone can rest, and more specifically YOU can rest, you'll have to finally get rid of the one, you'll have to kill GOD.

You'll have to set deep into the palace where God himself is said to reside, but it's not so simple, for there's still a long way to get to the bastards, and tons of creatures who think of your species as easy pickings, are you determined enough to do what's right and end of the suffering of the world?

DOULEUR is a short RPG inspired mainly by the likes of Space Funeral, Off and Yume Nikki and not so heavily by other games such as Korkolonit and Neru, the main gameplay consists of regular turn based battles, simple puzzle solving and a little bit of exploration towards the end, the artstyle and themes of the game are mainly inspired by Off and Space Funeral.

The randomized smutty fanfic challenge

Here's my entry: Hatsune Miku x Ghostbusters
Also keeping the format awful cuz yes.

After a long tour around za warudo, the popular as all fuck like holy shit legit way too fucking popular virtual star: Hatsuni Miku, had one last stop before she could finish her magical tour of fan works and songs she got from her fans, New York City!
She had been schedule to play at a hotel, some place known as Totsnots Hauntid Hotel.
The super famous star not really thinking anything weird of it arrived at the place in her Mikucopter and landed the thing in the roof of the building, there was no need for her to go to the reception since her company had already taken care of all that shit cuz like that would make the story boring, she made her way down the corridor before feeling a strange sensation going through her intangible holographic body, she turned around for a sec thinking someone might of bumped into her.
-That’s weird…W-who’s there?
She said In her funni robotic voice previous to the upgrade cuz the new versions are way too good and fuck that shit that’s not the Miku I grew up with.
The proto V-tuber started shaking as she noticed all the light were off, she sometimes didn’t notice things because of glitches in her system, realizing the ambient was 2 sp00ky 4 her she started running to the end of the hall but no matter how much she ran she would just not get to the end, she tried going in one of the room but couldn’t open the door because holograms can’t pull down door handles, she tried to go back out towards the Mikucopter but as she tried to run her legs would move but not her, feeling really scared she couldn’t do anything but do a funni high pitched scream like in those shitpost videos, this was a mistake for as soon as the squeal was heard a huge horde of stinky slimmer looking ghosts started coming out of the walls, the ghosts headed directly towards the virtual girl and suddenly took her by the arms because ghost arms can take other ghosts so it’s obvious they should be able to take holograms by the body parts, the ghosts held her in place as her voice kept going higher, but the ghost didn’t care because ghost ears don’t hurt like human ears and in fact made it worse cuz the ghosts were into that kind of shit if you know what I mean, the slimmer ghosts started pulling down her skirt and then her stripped pantsu, they stopped for a sec before one of them said: Itadakimasu and dived inside the holographic pussy, all the ghosts formed a line and started going inside the idols puss puss, about one godzillion ghosts went in and with each of them going inside the hologram girl she would ahego, the last one to get in took the pantsu and put them back unto the idol as it went in to make it look like nothing had ever happened and not even an expanded stomach like you’d expect in other shit fics but not this one cuz I don’t like that das not my fetish and also ghost magiks don’t expands parts I don’t like. Miku chan sighed in relief, she walked at the end of the hallway finally and pulled one of the service phones, she started dialing a phone number.

Meanwhile somewhere else in a firemen building cuz I don’t know the real name of the place I forgot oops, Ray and Egon were testing their newly and improved Succubus storing unit, Ray was really excited since he really wanted to catch lots and lots of succubus’s so he could relive the ghost blowjob he got that one time, Egon, since he is a proud asexual and we all know it, yes it’s canon, well actually no cuz of that new movie I think, the one that doesn’t have the queef jokes, you know the one, but we’ll pretend he is asexual anyways, looked at Ray with a little bit of disgust.
-Oh I can’t wait to catch some big titty banshees, it’s going to be great!
Said Ray with his child like enthusiasm. Egon gave em a kuudere stare, Chad Venkman who was taking a sweet lil nap in one of the nearby chairs started dreaming of something slimmer related probs how he would finally kill em maybe, when suddenly the phone rang.
Janine best waifu, check the animated series if you don’t believe me, there’s one episode where she’s in her underwear all the time for no reason, picked up the phone and answered with her nasally sexy as fuck voice.
-Hello, Ghostbusters… Yes… Yes… Yes Ma’am we also de-haunt people… virtual idols are no problem… We’re on our way.
Peter curious of what the call was for asked but kinda half pretending he didn’t care that much.
-So, where to?
Janine gave him a kuudere stare and replied
-They’re asking you to go to that one building, the you know the, the one that it’s called something not haunted I think.
Egon interrupted with a very clever remark.
-We had a lot of cases at that place, I wonder why…
Ray asked with his usual wholesome boye voice.
-Oh! Who’s the client?
Janine gave Ray a kuudere stare and replied.
-It’s world famous start Hatsunay Miku
-Hatsuny Myku?! Wow, I bet this case is going to be great; she is after all the most popular virtual idol after the Gorillaz! Oh I hope she gives me her holograph!
-Let’s get going.
Said Egon getting inside the Ecto 1, Janine hit the bell thingy for fire alarms cept it’s ghosts and the rest of the busters of ghost got in the vehicle, Wiston went down the big ol stripper pole they have in fire departments cuz he was sleeping just like Peter but like in his comfy bed or maybe was playing that one arcade they have that’s in the xbox360 game I think.
After like 20 fentoseconds of driving the Ghostbusters got out of the car and stared up into the building.
-Well fellas, you know what’s next.
Said Egon. Peter grunted with his Garfield like voice, oh yeah these are the animated ghost busters not the the movie ones, forgot to mention.
-Every fucking time! I had it, I HAD IT WITH THESE FUCKIGN STAIRS! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!
I’D RATHER GET SLIMED ONE TRILLION TIMES THAN WALK THESE DAMNED STAIRS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!
Ray interrupted Peter before he could say more naughty words not approved by the fox censors.
-Hey! Don’t say that, we’re going to get canned!
-Peter is right Ray, I had it with the fuckings stairs.
Said Winston in a very uncharacteristic manner because he’s good boy and good boys don’t swear, sike he would totally say I think I am not ultra sure.
-C-come on guys, we just need to do it one more time, we have bait and all, so don’t even worry about it ok? You guys know how this is.
Suddenly that little fucker, yeah you know the one, the green booger fucker who’s gotta come in and do funnies to ruin the plans because he’s a shit plot element, Slimmer, came out of Ecto one and ate the ghost bait in front of all 4 of them and then lole’d with his annoying gremlin voice. Peter who had enough of that green turd ghost just straight up zaps em and puts em in a trap, throws the trap in the sewer and the sewer filled with pink slime like in the second movie just decided not to work how it does in the movies and just evaporates the trap because fuck slimmer I ain’t gonna write him in the story.
-Good thing there was no one around to see that.
Says Garfield Tony Danza man and a funni can laughter track starts playing.
-Cut to the ghost busters going up all the way cuz writing a paragraph per level ain’t funni-
-We’ll, we’re here boys.
Says Ray wheezing and coughing cuz he smokes in the movies and that’s bad, don’t smoke.
-Look there she is!
Says Winston pointing to the virtual idol just kinda standing there not being menacing at all with all the lights turned on and not sp00ky like before.
-Something is not right.
Says Egon cuz he’s smart and he knows what’s up. Suddenly Hatsuni Miku’s smol arguably none existent depending on the artist breasts start getting big as all fuck, but like huge very huge, like the size of basketballs but like for giants who are like 30 meters tall, and yes meters because feet is nothing compared to a meter.
-Woah woah! Hey now! This is the kind of mission I like!
Says Peter getting a good look at the ghost inflated boobies. Miku puts her hands around her hunge anime milker stretching her arms with holographic magiks because holograms are just ghosts pretty much and starts pulling on her big choco chip areola nipples, with each stretch ghosts come out of her boobs and fill the room.
-GHOST NUT!
Says Winston, and he skeddadles skaddudles out of the way before a huge wave of ghost milkies / ghosts / ectoplasm / Nut hits Venkman.
-Fuck yeaaaaaaaaah!
Says Peter just straight up enjoy the shit out of the situation and his peepee gets hard like a fucking diamond. Egon decides to stay out of all the weird kinky shit cuz he’s still asexual in this story and I rather not l00d him up, Winston comes back after seeing the fucked up shit that just happened and feels some weird conflictive emotions that tell him maybe he does like what he’s seeing, Ray just stands there for a but still confused for a sec before his child brain recognizes his in a sexual situation.
-Ghost blowjob.
Whispers Ray, before a good ol wave of nostalgia comes back to him.
-Hey, Miku chan!
Miku Chan looks at Ray even tho her huge bazongas get in the way.
-Why don’t you give me a good ol’ GHOST BLOWJOB!
Miku chan straight up teleports on his bitch ass and pulls down Ray’s pants.
-AWWW YEEEEEEEEEAAAAH!
And then a ghost blowjob moment happens and Ray dies of feeling way too much kimochii in his body and becomes a ghost.
Taking the opportunity of his life Chad Venkman puts heis diamond hard peepee inside ghost Miku and then the whole bulding explodes in a burst of ecto cummies.
Then Miku and Venkan got married, dah end.


ThamksI hope u hated it.

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