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OBSCURE HALF FOUR THING RESPONSE COLLECTIVE

No More Lonely Hearts!

E Left please

Big version

FRIENDS

The Lonely League

I am ready for some SOUP-er

No More Lonely Hearts!

Here's the right part for O

Here it is complete

And here's in bige

No More Lonely Hearts!

Dibs on R left

And here's the big one

Teddy's Journey

OwO what this?

Let's work on your game descriptions!

Right here is a good example of a sentence that should be split up into multiple sentences. Commas are short pauses, yes. However, the end-of-sentence punctuation, (ie: periods, exclamations, and question marks) provide a bit more breathing room. Literally. One trick is to try and say what you wrote, and notice where you pause. That sentence might come out a little more like...

Oh, I think I get the idea more like now. I really do struggle lot when using periods and commas, that tip of diving where you would pause seems so obvious now. I hope now that I know this I won't be as rambly when writing things down or in this case abuse commas so much when I don't need to.


In an unknown dimension where the only sure thing is pain, a small bird boy named Picore has finally had enough. Countless days of insomnia has caused Picore to snap. Now, in order to ensure everyone in Dolores, especially him, can rest, he'll have to finally get rid of God.

You'll have to set deep into the palace where God, himself, is said to reside. Obviously, it's not that simple, for there's a long way to get to him, and tons of creatures who think of your species as easy pickings. Are you determined enough to do what's "right" and end of the suffering of the world? Maybe you'll even find out how it all got so bad?

...this would be my slight revision to the main portion of your description.

Oh, I think I'll definitely use this one, thank for helping me Marrend. uwu

Let's work on your game descriptions!

The only thing I am kinda of hesitant on the description is the use of You since I don't really want people to put themselves in the shoes of my characters, they're either like too extravagant and do weird things or they're like Satan in flesh so I'd rather not do that, and like yeah I might be like custom to put like the player for ref but I think I might have to change that little more

In an unknown dimension where the only sure thing is pain, a small bird boy named Picore has finally had enough. Countless days of insomnia has caused Picore to snap, now in order to ensure everyone in Dolores, especially him, can rest, he'll have to finally get rid of God.

You'll have to set deep into the palace where God, himself, is said to reside. Obviously, it's not that simple, for there's a long way to get to him, and tons of creatures who think of your species as easy pickings. Are you determined enough to do what's "right" and end of the suffering of the world? Maybe you'll even find out how it all got so bad.

Douleur is a short RPG, inspired mainly by the likes of Space Funeral, OFF and Yume Nikki, the latter of those two being the main inspirations for the game's art style. The main gameplay consists of turn based battles, simple puzzle solving, and a little bit of exploration towards the end.


-Not the exact exact thing but I hope this is better, I usually tend to use more commas since to me it all connects, so maybe that's like an issue on me.
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