CAZ'S PROFILE

Caz
LET'SBIAN DO THIS.
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Liberty's favourite waifu.
Has a market value of approximately 4 Touhou girls and a catgirl.
Wolf's Gang
This is a sample game created in "RPG Maker MZ" by Caz. As a monster, build up your army to take revenge on the heroes in this classic Fantasy RPG.

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You could always cut your ellipses at the end of words down to two dots instead of three.. < like that. I know it's not so grammatically nice but it cuts down on the amount of punctuation and gives your words a bit more flavour.

Or you could show her hesitation through interjections (um, ah.. er..) or stuttering "I s-suppose.." though I'm not sure that wouldn't make her sound just a bit too timid instead of the desired effect. D:

Either way, realistic character development for the awesome. And your maps with those shiny crystals are HNNGG.

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Maybe I'll make a special ICE CREAM WORLD or something and reuse those trees one day.. XD

But I'm glad you think they're okay, I was worried they might be a bit too different from the rest of the tiles!

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I realised that VX Ace's RTP doesn't actually have any signs that hang over the edge of buildings like in some of the previous makers and I couldn't find a way to hang it on the buildings (some don't have doors) without it looking horrible, so.. I just threw a bridge piece under there and hoped to god it would work (I also have waaaay too little time to be making a new tile for everything the RTP lacks D:).

I suppose the coney trees could be considered like topiaries if they're too neat a shape? :P They might just get trimmed regularly!

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Thanks! It's my "the-colour-I-picture-Australia-to-embody" tint and will happen most everywhere!

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I didn't even notice that box until you mentioned it.. maybe I should pay more attention!

This looks sooooo goooooood~! DDDDD:

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The random hairs in the middle look waaay too thick because of the amount of shading on them. I was iffy about them, and I'm probably just gonna take them out all together. I mainly use the ink tool when I do lineart, but I'm thinking of swapping programs to something that would add more variation to line thickness (at the minute it's all one size).

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What is it about the lines you dislike most? Any suggestions on how to improve them?

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I've tried making shoulders/arms thicker as opposed to previous works where they were tiny, but I think it might have backfired here.. will see if I can squish them down a little bit, and fix that bumpy bit on the right shoulder!

I see what you mean about the right eye too. I feel it's a bit too far into his face, so I'll try moving it out a bit and see what that does.

Thanks for the help, Galv. Your feedback always improves these things tenfold. ^^

EDIT: And done.

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Aw what that's lame, I thought there were cool bullets and stuff. :/ Vibrations are less cool! Make things with more bullets!

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Thanks for the input, guys!

CC, looking back at the previous versions has made me realise how childish and unserious he looks and I wanted something a little bit more adult this time around. It is highly likely that I'll give him a beard once I learn to draw them without making them look like hideous lines all over his face. XD

EDIT: Okay I have vastly improved him now. This was the original: