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Ringmaster Clause

Oh my, I can't believe a year has already passed since I played QMS. I'll definitely give this a spin when I have the time. Can't wait to see how you've improved!

Queen Mary's Script Retold

I just definitely adore the unpolished, childish art style, which I think fits the game perfectly.

The writing however, could use some work and it did hinder my understanding of the story at times. Also, the lack of music at the beginning was slightly off-putting, but not entirely worrisome.

But minor things aside, the part that deeply bothered me the most was the pacing of the plot, which felt a little bit awkward. I felt like the plot didn't go anywhere when needed and when the ending finally drew closer, important plot details were thrown at your face.

For instance, there was barely any character development in the beginning, but all too suddenly the ending arrives and the characters undergo through great change, making you wonder what exactly ignited it, despite the fact that the characters seemed defiant to change throughout their journey. In other words, it just felt like the character development came out of nowhere, or maybe the characters motives weren't presented very well?


Overall though, I did find the game enjoyable. Because I'm a masochist. This game was just a breath of fresh air. It was short, sweet, but definitely worth the time.

A little insight on the characters Mary:
**From my understanding, Mary is 14-15 years old? o_O Or did I just misread it?
If she is, was there any particular reason why she talks/acts younger than she actually is? Like perhaps, her tenuous grasp on reality?
**Clause stop being a tsundere.

Star Stealing Prince

@Ronove
Playing this game was such a wonderful experience. Looking forward to your future projects!

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