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Let's work on your game descriptions!
Ah, this had helped me greatly, Marrend.
I've removed the game Overview section and just modified the Features section a bit. Thank you so much for your help :D
I've removed the game Overview section and just modified the Features section a bit. Thank you so much for your help :D
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Hey, guys! This thread was suggested to me as, you might've guessed it already, my game was denied due to grammar issues. English isn't my native language so I was hoping that I could get some help improve my game's description. Thanks!
Here's my game description...
GAME DESCRIPTION
Tonitrus 34N is a short action adventure and puzzle rpg. Join Caelum, Zed, Mei and Gion in their stand against the tyrant General of Castrafort. Freely switch among the squad to make them work together and use their gifts to solve puzzles. Engulf yourselves in the game's rich story and discover different endings.
SYNOPSIS
Terrorists once threatened the whole world. Their thirst for power lead to a massive war that caused destruction and countless deaths. Many had suffered, many had took their own lives just to escape the frightening tortures. Despite this, several people didn't falter and continued breaking their way from the darkness' grasp. It took them several years before the world finally regained the freedom and peace.
It's been more than two decades since the world sunk into darkness because of the war. Castrafort, where the last battle took place and now a city that symbolizes the bravery shown by the people stood firmly and peacefully to ensure that no terrorist attack were to ever happen again. All of this were made possible by the sole ruler and the city's General.
One of the residents of Castrafort was an infamous man named Caelum. To him, Castrafort would never be the city what people had depicted it to be. It was nothing but a place that put a curse on him.
FEATURES
- 4 Playable Characters
- Challenging Puzzles
- Switch Among 4 Characters to Solve Puzzles
- Balanced Battles
- Stealth
- Multiple Endings
Here's my game description...
GAME DESCRIPTION
Tonitrus 34N is a short action adventure and puzzle rpg. Join Caelum, Zed, Mei and Gion in their stand against the tyrant General of Castrafort. Freely switch among the squad to make them work together and use their gifts to solve puzzles. Engulf yourselves in the game's rich story and discover different endings.
SYNOPSIS
Terrorists once threatened the whole world. Their thirst for power lead to a massive war that caused destruction and countless deaths. Many had suffered, many had took their own lives just to escape the frightening tortures. Despite this, several people didn't falter and continued breaking their way from the darkness' grasp. It took them several years before the world finally regained the freedom and peace.
It's been more than two decades since the world sunk into darkness because of the war. Castrafort, where the last battle took place and now a city that symbolizes the bravery shown by the people stood firmly and peacefully to ensure that no terrorist attack were to ever happen again. All of this were made possible by the sole ruler and the city's General.
One of the residents of Castrafort was an infamous man named Caelum. To him, Castrafort would never be the city what people had depicted it to be. It was nothing but a place that put a curse on him.
FEATURES
- 4 Playable Characters
- Challenging Puzzles
- Switch Among 4 Characters to Solve Puzzles
- Balanced Battles
- Stealth
- Multiple Endings
Lakserf
author=Old_Timer
Overall, you made an excellent work: I hope you won't resent my comments above!
Old Timer
Of course, I wouldn't! In fact, I'm thankful. Thanks for the feedback :D
Regarding the issues you mentioned, I myself have a W7 OS and it's working fine when playing through the game. What I have in mind that may be causing the crashed was making the game a single executable file. It might also be the reason of the fps drops and the save issue.
I'm currently working on the issues addressed by a few more people who sent me their feedback and will be uploading a new version once I'm done. Once again, thank you for taking your time playing the game and for letting me know what you think. Much appeciated. :D
Lakserf
That's good to know! :D
Nope, there isn't. I've added the exp to my to do list. Will make it better. Thank you for the feedback I needed. :)
PS. By "he" I assume it was Kouji you left out of the group?
Nope, there isn't. I've added the exp to my to do list. Will make it better. Thank you for the feedback I needed. :)
PS. By "he" I assume it was Kouji you left out of the group?
Lakserf
author=Firefly84
Just finished your demo.
The only bug I met very often: 2 battles directly after hitting a portal. It can happen anywhere.
I trained until level 10 before facing the Alpha Nocturne.
Perhaps I will try the other solution next time.
How many quest are there in the first town? I found and finished 6.
Oh, I was playing as a female, but in the last event in Davendill she is referred as "him". There are more typos but I didn't testplay it.
Fist off, thank you so much for trying out the game. I hope you had fun. I'll surely look into the bugs you mentioned. And yes, there are 6 side quests in the first town.
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author=Frogge
*monsters' would be more accurate I think, unless there is only one monster
I like the slightly blueish tint you gave the tiles!
Thank you for the feedback. :)
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