ITAJU'S PROFILE

Dear C_C,

as you have given me so much feedback, i'd like to give you some as well. :)
I like the style of your artworks, as they have a very unique style that makes them distinguishable from other artists.

A problem that I see in this particular work might be the distraction off important parts by lesser important parts. I think the strongest attraction is being caused by the wrappings around the chest, the shoulderpad and the hair. But it should be the face and the body in its total. Maybe you should try to lighten up the areas. The left arm is hard to feel perspectively. At first I thought that the character holds is arm and hides the hand behind the wrapping. Now I can see that it's the hand with fingers, it just might not pop out good enough. Also, the blue paintings on the skin don't seem to harmonize too much with the skin patches nearby. It doesn't look like a union. Try to make the transition pretty smooth. I can see that the skin of your characters is much darker than the hair. This holds problems by looking at your character's heads. I don't think the problem is the dark skin (i'm not a racist, lol) but rather the bright hair.

Good work, though. Heads up. :) In Germany we say "Meckern auf hohem Niveau" - "lamenting on high level" - the meaning is: just to grump around details while the rest is perfect.