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Now I'm making the map for university area but i don't understand how to make it can someone please help me, this is a simple i made of the map the three building at the corner in the university I'm also thinking of adding middle school, high school, and kindergarten in this area


Screenshot Survival 20XX

Im making a city for my game but this is the first I'm making a city and i made this map but i find odd so i wanted some feedback should i keep this map or should i change something



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Thank you very much for all your help
Now i will talk to my brother jester who the co-developer and writer of the game he is the one that wanted the loop to be hidden and resubmit it

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Officer Ethan is returns to his home for the first time in a few years to attend a party. But when his father is unexpectedly murdered, And an inexplicable supernatural events begin to occur, he must try to uncover the secret his family is trying to hide. Can he find the one that killed his father? And who is the mystery person pulling the strings behind the scenes?

The game contains 7 loops with multiple endings, and an engaging storyline.
In each loop, players will lead Ethan to question people and search locations for clues as to his father's murder. What ending you earn will depend on what items you uncover during the game.


This game contains sensitive content including domestic violence, murder, and sexual assault. Please play at your own discretion.

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Officer Ethan is returns to his home for the first time in a few years to attend a party. But when his father is unexpectedly murdered, And an inexplicable supernatural events begin to occur, he must try to uncover the secret his family is trying to hide. Can he find the one that killed his father? And who is the mystery person pulling the strings behind the scenes?

The game contains 7 loops with multiple endings, and an engaging storyline.

This game contains sensitive content including domestic violence, murder, and sexual assault. Please play at your own discretion.

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The game is like this he has to find the murderer the game is 7 days on the 7 day he finds the murderer but for some reason he goes back to the 1st day but this time someone else kill's his father this goes on until the 7th loop in the 7th loop he finds the mastermind all of the murderer are victim of his father's, his father is very bad people even he doesn't like his father

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His father gets murder the second day after he comes home and he is has to find the murderer by getting people's alibi and find clues and murder weapon and in the end say who the killer is and the mastermind is someone who wants his father to be murdered so he is making people do it for him but i don't want to reveal to much about the mastermind and supernatural is this is a loop game he loops with pandant he finds on 3rd day every time the game ends the 7 chapters are 7 loops but i don't want to reveal about the loop there no battle

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Been rejected 2 times and i changed the story as much as i can i don't want to reveal to much please help




Description:
Officer Ethan was called back home where he didn't return for few years to attend an party. His father's murder causes him to question his family's dark history. There's also some seemingly supernatural things that he can't explain. he starts trying uncover the secret his family trying to hide. Can he find the one that killed his father. And who is the mystery person pulling the strings behind the scenes.Play to find out

This game contains some strong themes like domestic violence, murder and sexual assault. Please play this game at your own pace and don't puss yourself.

This game will contain 7 chapters
Multiple endings
Engaging storyline

Reason for rejection: Still needs a paragraph on gameplay. First paragraph could do with some proofreading.
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