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A Timeless Story

author=Midori_Fragments
author=KitoruK1
Hi I used to play this game.
it has been about 3 years(?) since I first played.
Now I just want to play again.
This story inspired me too much to be a game developer major in the future.
This is one of the nicest things someone has ever told me, really. ;;
Sorry for the late answer, and I'm happy you managed to fix the problem!
Also, I hope I can work on a remake of A Timeless Story someday, I was just 16 years old when I released it, so I didn't think much on some things and the story ended up kinda rushed-


I really look forward to it!
The game was so nice, i recommended A Timeless Story with A Figment of Discord to my friends.
While A Timeless Story was kinda soothing for me (at first when Lysander travels down the memory lane), A Figment of Discord was pretty thrilling (I died a lot whoops).
My old computer cant handle extra apps since its disk was full so i had to erase A Timeless Story. So when i finally had a new one, i downloaded it right away along with the prequel.
I will root for you and your future projects.

A Timeless Story

Oh yeah hi its me again
I just downloaded the game again and it stucked at midori fragments screen...
it used to work alright on my old computer, what should i do?
Edit: fixed the computer, its alright again ~

A Timeless Story

Hi I used to play this game.
it has been about 3 years(?) since I first played.
Now I just want to play again.
This story inspired me too much to be a game developer major in the future.

My Family, My Suffering

author=NoBody13
author=KitoruK1
So you were participating for winterruption so there were so many side quests and only one main quest?
Yeah, I did that purposely. One, because I hadn't too much time and two, because the event was concerned on the sidequests.

author=KitoruK1
So I have finished the game literally a minute ago. So here are some of my opinions:
_ First of is about the story, it was interesting but I couldn't do anything beside doing some minor quest. You have a great story plot but you should let the player play the main quest, let us make some choices. So that we can understand more about the story, about the emotions that Jackie has to go through.
_ Secondly, you made more spelling mistakes than grammar mistakes. But about this part, if you are not an English native speaker then it's fine.
_ Thirdly, the ending was so sad that you should make another more happy ending for Jackie and his family. Like I said, you have a great story plot, try to expand it is a good thing.
_ Then, I am curious about the man and the girl at the town gate. I thought that he would kidnnap her and Jackie would save her. (Was I wrong?)
_ Finally, great art work, the graphic was fine, you could use some art for the ending not just words.
Sooooo, those were my thoughts. Well, I was new to RPGmaker games and not a English native speaker, I could have made a few mistakes in this. I would love to see this game in a new version that has a more emotional story, more pathways and more endings. No pressure! Keep doing your best, okay? ;) <3
PS: I was heart-breaking when the game ended like that :(


For the girl and the man, no Jackie shouldn't save her. (maybe in the future version?)

Thank you so much for the feedback! And who knows? Maybe after "if's demo" I will do an updated version without those useless sidequests ;) And for the end, well... I like sad/realistic ends. Actually I wanted to do 3 ends: Bad end, good end and true end. But as I said before, I hadn't so much time.

PS: I like your avatar, HAIKYUUUU!!

Your welcome! When the new version is updated, I want to try it! ;)

My Family, My Suffering

So you were participating for winterruption so there were so many side quests and only one main quest?

My Family, My Suffering

So I have finished the game literally a minute ago. So here are some of my opinions:
_ First of is about the story, it was interesting but I couldn't do anything beside doing some minor quest. You have a great story plot but you should let the player play the main quest, let us make some choices. So that we can understand more about the story, about the emotions that Jackie has to go through.
_ Secondly, you made more spelling mistakes than grammar mistakes. But about this part, if you are not an English native speaker then it's fine.
_ Thirdly, the ending was so sad that you should make another more happy ending for Jackie and his family. Like I said, you have a great story plot, try to expand it is a good thing.
_ Then, I am curious about the man and the girl at the town gate. I thought that he would kidnnap her and Jackie would save her. (Was I wrong?)
_ Finally, great art work, the graphic was fine, you could use some art for the ending not just words.
Sooooo, those were my thoughts. Well, I was new to RPGmaker games and not a English native speaker, I could have made a few mistakes in this. I would love to see this game in a new version that has a more emotional story, more pathways and more endings. No pressure! Keep doing your best, okay? ;) <3
PS: I was heart-breaking when the game ended like that :(

My Family, My Suffering

author=NoBody13
author=KitoruK1
The characters' lines are missing, hope you'll fix it :))
You mean here on the page?

No, in the game, Johnny's lines are too big, some parts are missing, maybe Jack's and Sonny's lines as well.

My Family, My Suffering

There were some mistakes(I guess): The characters' lines are missing, after I killed the cow I couldn't move, hope you'll fix it :))

Just Doing My Job

Umm there was a bug, the Fizzy Soda and White Rice were switch. When I bought the Soda, the quest counted it as the Rice.

Four Eyes

The game was nice, a little bit fast-pace and I didn't know it was a BL game until the last part. Still love it tho <3
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