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Office of Weirdness Review

Thank you, I think this bug can be caused by using polish characters in files names but I'm not sure. I fixed few things, this "abstract thinking" was mistake too.

Let's work on your game descriptions!

author=Marrend
First off, the phrase "All game is about..." jumps out at me in all the wrong ways. It could be "This game is all about a girl..." and retain what I believe you want to say.

Second, I don't like how you keep repeating how this game is different than your atypical horror game. Even if your claim about the setting is true (which I kinda doubt), nothing in that description suggests how your game would be different from any other horror game ever? It's possible your screenshots could go a long way in covering this point, but, I cannot see them.


Thank you.

Let's work on your game descriptions!

They denied similar description but I changed few things. Is anything wrong in it?
"My best completed game and probably first RPGmaker horror game about going to the office. It's puzzle game with dark atmosphere and few surprises. There's 4 endings.

All game is about girl, who goes to the office with unusual request. Plot is not horror in this case. It's different, than in other horror games. All effect is in the world creation.
This game is surreal, the action takes place in abnormal, haunted, a little bit grotesque world.
Changes, that are creepy and typical for horror seems to be part of "normality".

She has been waiting for months...
Finally the time has come... "

UnExpected

Thank, I fixed music.

UnExpected

Sorry, there was a little mistake in the describe, this is not typical YN fangame, it has elements of puzzle horror game. It is possible to play but it can be hard. I'll not add walkthrough because I think it would be a spoiler.

Welcome to my world

author=holinasylph
No Download -.-
author=linagaoli
No download?

Sorry.
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