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BluMiu's Quill- Writings and Poetry

Ah! OK, this sheds some more light on the situation. Penumbras have their own relatively free camps outside the cities although still monitored in a way.
Inside cities it is largely the classic ghetto segregation. However, it sounds like it is not slavery or abuse, more like humans are afraid of Penumbras.
Perhaps. Or this one is just the "nicer" part :D

What are you thinking about right now?

Adon, your avatar reminds me of this:
https://www.instagram.com/p/BGsTSuFjPL2/

Although I mean that peacefully :D

What are you thinking about right now?

Lib, I have to say your avatar is freakishly cool in a very creepy and menacing way, haha.
Good job or whoever did it for you.

BluMiu's Quill- Writings and Poetry

You were not kidding about the language, haha. Cannot get a word but I bet that is intended so far because you should also feel like a stranger as well. Although the girl gets it.

Usual segregation. Makes sense. Humans needs to know their level of magic because they fear it. A smart Penumbra would still lie and keep their magic under control and strike at the right time. Unless there are trained humans who can smell it...

Also, edit your OP.

We try to get every active RMN user to post in this topic.

I am just an unrelated extra.

BluMiu's Art Dump

No kidding! You put a lot of detail there that shows a lot of love for it.
The rose petals must have been a pain or at least I know people who can do it but consider it more or of a mundane task, haha.

Or clothes embroidery (or what is the word) but I have yet to meet someone who does NOT love designing clothes and actually wants to play with them as much as possible :D
Love it.

BluMiu's Quill- Writings and Poetry

How deep are going to be with the language? Romanian like is a pretty good fit!
It is not easy. Some people can do it though. And I do not mean changing letters but using English or exchanging words but still using English grammar and such.

I guess the characters are only going to speak it in situations like here so you as a reader also feel lost and talking to a stranger and to differentiate but still. Creating or constructing a language is tough even with a base.
Time to study Romanian... :D

BluMiu's Quill- Writings and Poetry

Ya. It is good and organized that way :D
Plus using the spoiler tag like you do.
Class and style!

BluMiu's Quill- Writings and Poetry

Resurrection of Knight
Cool! I see what that drawing means now :D

There are often discussions online about what is easier: drawing or writing. Writers often get the shorter end and are automatically dismissed by many. In the end, most people look at pictures in comics or gameplay in games. Sometimes writers are really pushed in the back.

But I guess it is not just writing words and done. You had to visualize the fight just as much to write it better than simple sentences about trading blows.

As simple as it, I actually know the struggle of writing.

Cool stuff :>

One tip in case you are going to post more.
Have a master post with links. Your OP. And edit it.
Like:

Resurrection of Knight

Transients: Blitz
Part 1
Part 2

etc.

What are you thinking about right now?

Actually, this sort of acting is enough for me NOT to check ANY of your games...

I did not say G does not have a message. I said it does not have right memes and thus will not be picked up by people who usually pick such stuff like PDP and that is what Pom has going for it. And that Pom has a message but you are saying it does not.

Are you in that group of people who think they are somehow destined to be successful? Who knows. You know. I am lately meeting them a lot. Hm.

Anyway. If you are that serious then you should go back to your projects instead of arguing here. I guess.