NOACCEPTANCE772'S PROFILE

author=LockeZ
Your title screens are always a little too artsy for my personal taste, but I can't deny you are getting really good at accomplishing what you're trying to do. This one is pretty nice looking overall; I can appreciate the Sin-City-ish use of color, and the use of the three images side by side conveys what I assume are three major ideas of your game (damage, murder, pain?) without seeming like an overwhelming mess.

Some suggestions:
- I'm guessing the red speckles on the woman's back and side are supposed to be blood, but they don't look much like blood. The shape of the red speckles kind of looks like a large scab that is in the process of healing, after she was scraped over a large portion of her body, like from sliding across pavement. If that's actually what you were going for, I recommend using a darker shade of red, though. If you were going for blood, I recommend making it less speckled and more splattered/drippy.
- The image on the computer screen would look better if instead of stretching it out horizontally to fit the screen, you just kept it at the original proportions and then filled the empty space on the left and right sides of the screen with white. Like so:

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(I didn't resize the japanese text in the computer screen, and moved it a little to the side, because after changing the dude's head it looked off-center. Your call though, I didn't really know for sure what to do with it, I don't even know if it was stretched or not)