ROY'S PROFILE

Me too....you worry me with so many EE springing from that warped thing you call a brain!
God I hope you dont have that damn marsh again....its too tricky and I HATE it.





Damn I just KNOW its still there!

Add a little definition to the legs...a warrior type girl needs some strong legs!
Maybe also a small beauty mark or tiny tattoo.

I think part of the thing is, to me anyway, that the characters look rather a tad pastel-like or ghosty. Maybe a simple attempt would be to hardline their edges.

Unless I missed it....the only place to save is at the Castle? Ouch.

Well.............I have to admit, the constant chatter between the two gets annoying. Especially when you are trying to get somewhere, accomplish something and it stops simply for a moment of total inanity. BUT on the other hand when this happens, if her image was the one where she is showing her panties, then at least we have something to look at while she blathers! Just like in real life...if we have a visual, she can talk all day.
If the chatter is going to be a permanent fix (even in the next part) then at least change images.
Oh and why are her eyes white orbs at times when she is frustrated...there must be enough artsy fartsy stuff to give her something other than that...it just seems her eyes roll back in her head.
Little Apple does seem to be maturing at an alarming rate doesnt she.... in the beginning with Rain, she becomes jealous and even has these romantic notions. Before long she will have to have an entire outfit change more befitting a little seductress!