What about no?
What's wrong dear, had a bad dream?




the art is great, but the maps are sooooo bleak...
It's supposed to be bleak and empty, I'm sorry if you don't like that, but there is a reason for it I assure you


Cutting off the character's head looks really awkward. If it's being done on purpose for symbolic reasons, it's not obvious - doing so in a way other than cropping it right at the edge of the screen would be better. For example, fading to white starting at her neck.

The removal of her face combined with the newsprint effect makes me think of a lost memory, like the character has been erased from history. Is that the intended effect?

Yes cutting it off was on purpose, but not really entirely 'symbolic reasons' the truth is I had originally made a full picture for the title but I forgot to fit it to the full resolution for RPG Maker VX Ace. And if I had cut it off anywhere else, I mean even according to your suggestions it didn't give the effect that I really wanted.

And yes, I guess you could say that. More as the games protagonist Aurora and the game itself revolves sometimes around stories and books. Thusly the burning pages effect.But, some of what you say is true, I did mean for it to give some one more of that idea. So, I'm glad someone caught that.
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