VERIFYEDRASTA'S PROFILE

away* :)!

hahahaha, I had fun reading this review!
I can't believe you actually considered playing this game, not to mention... COMPLETING IT!
Just by looking at the gamepage you can tell it deserves a 0.5 (Or a zero!)

-Netspeak: Will be removed

-Short introduction / No backround information:
My intention was to make the player confused about where these two characters came from, or even... what they are.
I didn't want to give away my secret, but I guess I will:
It's not clear in the demo, but Ortho and Gonal are aliens and I wanted the player to find this out, not by me explaining it, but by small clues.
So you say some backround would be nice, but I don't know how to give backround without revealing this :I (And this is just a demo, there will be more clues along the way, as will more information be revealed.)

-"Lastly, I was totally confused by the presentation of the level. Unless this is a world so heavily jaded that slaughtering kids during Halloween is kosher, someone would have called the Police."
I'm still learning the English (It's not my first language), so could you explain to me what you mean by this in more... basic terms, hehe.
(Lots of people don't know that I use google translate to communicate with English speakers.)

Haha! Again, Mayor, I'm a guy *ExDee*
I'll read this in detail and comment on the parts you think needed improvement, when I get home from work and I

Thank you Yoshio! I didn't even expect a review from you :)

I am glad you pointed out all those things in this review. I didn't know people disliked net speech so much. I thought it'd be funny, but your right If I want people to take this game seriously i must remove it.

I didn't know how bad I failed at characterization until you pointed it out, thanks! I didn't really give Ortho much time to flesh out her character and I should. I will most definitely work on that to show what she's all about.

I'm also glad that the story interested you because It certainly interested me when I thought it up :) So if the first part caught your interest then you will love what I have in store ;) (I can't wait to finish it)

The music and sound. The looping of that track that is played in town is just my damn laziness! I will definitely fix this up to work perfectly (No matter how long it takes!) As for the screaming sound effect being played EVERYTIME you kill an enemy, once again my laziness ... I will work on it, you can bet that ;)