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Excellent! I was definitely feeling the need for this at some points in the demo.

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I think the pure text format is fine, given it's Jimmy's imagination (and I do like me some prose), but I do feel there's something awkward about the way it's currently handled. Maybe if the screen was totally whited out so we could focus more on Jimmy's thoughts? But maybe that would look too weird and empty.

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I couldn't help reading this as LOVE. Undertale has ruined me XD

And huh, I didn't notice Jonathan in the party before. It's interesting to see Jimmy's party won't be restricted to his family as I initially assumed.

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Yeah, the ceiling is dropping as well. Inside this tunnel, you can only move left/right, so I'm hoping it reads more like a profile view when you're actually there. Having a ceiling drop in a top-down view is tough since the ceiling is normally invisible, so I hope I'm conveying that clearly enough.


Hm, yeah, the stripes on the maroon part make it look primarily wall-like, but it doesn't get much shorter in the narrower section, which I think is what's confusing me. Maybe if the wall gets chopped down more than the yellow floor(?) it would be clearer? Or maybe it's just clearer in action.

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...Wait, the 3/4th view is really confusing there. it looks like the tunnel just gets narrower, but the ceiling also drops?

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Yeah, I do think a lot of gamers associate black roofs with underground/interior maps. I can't help but subconsciously see this shot as depicting a subterranean village.

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Oh, so like, they're tilted up? That seems like it'll be difficult to convey unless they move.

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Yeah, this is really cute! Reminds me of Super Mario RPG.

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There's no shame in ripping off something excellent.
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