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An Assassins Odyssey: The Epic of the Dark Scrolls
author=fifacv
In SW Kuru the door of the swestenr hous is closed (2nd quest in pub)
Thanks for letting me know. I'll check to see if this is a bug.
Lufia Trinity
Lullaby
Pingelig completed!
author=SpermidineZetsubou means despair in Japanese and Ermorden means murder in German, you are not wrong in your curiosity. Although my writing skills are somewhat laughable, I do try to keep a theme to these kingdoms. I hope you look forward to the game when it's completed.
"Pingelig" means something like "picky" or "fussy" in German. I'm curious if this meaning is somehow reflected in the story or NPC behavior. :D
School For The Friendless
Goal setting!
author=Marrend
What's our goal?
To do our best!
No, boys. This year, our goal is victory!
*mutters of 'Victory?' turning into cheers of 'Victory!'*
I can't help but imagine Natsuki Subaru in my head when I hear that 'victory'
An Assassins Odyssey: The Epic of the Dark Scrolls Review
author=aquatorrentauthor=awakenedfaith182heya, it's been a while. It's good to hear that you made some progress to the game. My memory is a bit vague on this, but i'll do my best to explain from what i remember on the game.
Hey aquatorrent, I've added quite a lot to the game over the past two weeks and feel like I can add a new more better demo by the end of the month, but I would like to know why you previously said that there is "no character development at all". I thought that my story has quite a bit of development, because I really put a lot of effort in that aspect of the game. However it doesn't seem to get through to you at least, my initial idea was to form the development for Chelsea in the Zetsubou kingdom and later on more character development for Max in Asalena. Could you perhaps give me some pointers so that I can further better the story in terms of character development? My writing skills are pretty novice like as I'm sure you've noticed, so any help with this will be greatly appreciated.
Sincerely
I couldn't resonate with the characters at all. They feel like pawns to the boss that only agree to whatever he said without any complains (they only reply with something like "yes boss" like a soldier...). They lack personality (even Florian who was lazy at the beginning suddenly becomed so motivated and agreeable after he joined the party, it's as if he's brainwashed or something). As for the story on Chelsea, I felt it's more like she remembered what happened in her past, that's all. There is no continuation from that (maybe she got softened to her "dad" after that, but I kinda forgot, especially since it got overshadowed by other event).
Character development usually refers to someome who underwent changes for the better (like someone who is very scared suddenly tries to save someone that he want to protect or something), not a story about the past. Character's background story can also be an initator for character development, but it doesn't mean that it always is.
I hope you get what i meant, and good luck with the game!
Yeah that makes sense to me. Thanks for the info, I'll start to work on the story more thoroughly from now on. I'll see if I can get a friend to help me with the development of my characters.
An Assassins Odyssey: The Epic of the Dark Scrolls Review
author=aquatorrent
No problem. I'm glad you are striving to make the product better. It has a good potential, so i'm sure you'll pull it off.
Hey aquatorrent, I've added quite a lot to the game over the past two weeks and feel like I can add a new more better demo by the end of the month, but I would like to know why you previously said that there is "no character development at all". I thought that my story has quite a bit of development, because I really put a lot of effort in that aspect of the game. However it doesn't seem to get through to you at least, my initial idea was to form the development for Chelsea in the Zetsubou kingdom and later on more character development for Max in Asalena. Could you perhaps give me some pointers so that I can further better the story in terms of character development? My writing skills are pretty novice like as I'm sure you've noticed, so any help with this will be greatly appreciated.
Sincerely
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