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Linus: The Forgotten Day...
A coming-of-age tale set in a gritty, medieval world.

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Ha ha, they're sort of similar. Only Ari is actually a pretty good physical attacker, while Linus acts more like a healer-type. He's also kind of angry and lashes out at people (due to his illness), as opposed to Patrick who's a sweetheart most of the time. :p

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Ah, thanks! I know I've mentioned this before but I think the writing in Luchi's games and Luxaren is pretty amazing, so it's good to hear compliments from you two. :)

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Cool, I've got a bit of free time so I'll get started on it today!

Also, I have a comment on Ianna's age. I think it'd be interesting if she was like, two or three years older. I know you lowered Tristian's age, which I think makes sense and makes her more intriguing, but I think doing the same for Ianna makes her venture more into the standard "princess locked in her dad's castle" trope. This trope is fine of course, but altering it a bit could be cool. I think it'd be a lot more interesting if Ianna was 21 years old (the age most kids are considered as "adults") and was still somewhat innocent and not knowledgeable about the world outside. This would be interesting because her being an actual adult and still inexperienced with how the world outside the walls works would show just how sheltered of a life she's had. Making her 17, well, I think most kids that age don't have a clue at all either way, even if they weren't locked in a castle. Also, making her closer to Tristy's age puts them more at en even footing and would in turn showcase the differences their characters have. Two women of similar age, who come from the same society, but are completely different in their outlook of the world due to how they were raised.

That's just my opinion though. Ianna being a young teenage princess and Tristy being a bit older still makes for a super cool character dynamic and you can't really go wrong with it either way. :p

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I could do that for you if you're still using Fire Emblem edits. I have a ton of experience trying to make unique child portraits for Linus. :p

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It'd be cool if we see flashbacks that show how Tristiane and Ianna first met. I'd like to see them getting through the awkwardness of new friendships and being all nervous and quiet around each other at first. :p

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I for one really love the naming conventions you used. :)
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