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We Are! Talking about One Piece~
author=KoopaKush
I believe it will, the Wano Arc anime wise has been really great honestly. Sanji vs Page One was pretty well animated! Can we talk about the manga and how it's been straight fire? My man Oden <3
Yeah, anime has been doing a great job in wano arc, lengthening some fights in a good way (delivering more details and great changes). Toei can't be lazy since wano country = japan in One Piece universe. XD I think it'll end up pretty bad for both sides, Kaido should be able to kill 1 or 2 ppl from the Straw Hats x Minks x Samurai Alliance.
We Are! Talking about One Piece~
I love One Piece! The anime version is so badly done though, except for some arcs. Even the manga has its ups and downs. I hope the incoming Fire Festival Invasion is lived up to the expectations!
Let's work on your game descriptions!
author=Marrend
First, you were right about using "its" rather than "it's". So, again, I apologize for not being clearer on that point.
Though, personally speaking, I wouldn't combine "The nation of Diaclou..." into the second paragraph. Let me try to be clear on this. In a pure, technical sense, what you have there works. The reference of "that army" would still point toward the Eisenclad Army. However, the thoughts are more closely related to each other than other the statements made.
That's a plot twist! XD It's ok. It's just me fooling myself, I didn't read your post carefully. Thank you so much for helping me out with the game description, Marrend. It was such a mess, now it looks really great. :)
Let's work on your game descriptions!
1) Ah, I see. Forgive me for my ignorance.
Thank you for enlightening me. :)
2) I think I'll use "the demons of the Daegon Tribe". It sounds really nice. :)
3) lol. yes, it's my bad habit, I tend to create sentences with lots of information. Bulking up everything (even the dialogue in-game) with unnecessary explanation.
So, the game description would be like...
...this? Is it fine to merge the second and third line into one paragraph? *The resulting war was... & The nation of Diaclou...
Thank you for enlightening me. :)
2) I think I'll use "the demons of the Daegon Tribe". It sounds really nice. :)
3) lol. yes, it's my bad habit, I tend to create sentences with lots of information. Bulking up everything (even the dialogue in-game) with unnecessary explanation.
So, the game description would be like...
Within the sky-archipelago of Althandar, lived a race of pure-blood first humans, called Skyrean. The last King's Gathering in the Axis of the Three Worlds of Existence gave the Skyrean a "reason" to form an alliance with the demons of the Daegon Tribe to obliterate the "lesser" human species.
The resulting war was a lost cause. Kingdoms fell, and millions of people perished. What few that did survive were driven to slavery or worse, with the demons and Skyrean placing themselves into more influential, ruling, positions. The nation of Diaclou, with it's impressive industry and technology, was spared the expense of this war. In the interim, an elite force within it's Eisenclad Army, has become the hachet-men for the remnants of free humanity.
This story centers on an officer of a contingent of that army, named Lucain. He has placed himself somewhat squarely in justifying all reasons and motives. This leads him to a vicious truth that has been concealed over the past centuries.
...this? Is it fine to merge the second and third line into one paragraph? *The resulting war was... & The nation of Diaclou...
Let's work on your game descriptions!
author=Marrend
Maybe something like...
...this?
Hello, thanks for fast response. :)
It's perfect except for a few things I want to make sure :
1. Within "it's" Eisenclad, or within "its" Eisenclad?
2. Daegon Clan is the clan that once ruled over the Demon World.
Would it be better to use "demons" instead of using the name of the clan?
-> ...gave the Skyrean a "reason" to form an alliance with the demons to obliterate the "lesser" human species.
3. I want to remove Maegarf's name there. And give Lucain a little confusion muddled the role-playing as a main character. Something like :
-> This story centers on an officer of a contingent of that army, named Lucain, who places himself somewhat squarely in justifying all reasons and motives, leading him to a vicious truth that has been concealed over the past centuries.
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Hi Marrend! It's been a while. Could you help me to check this out too :
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SETTING
Set on a sky archipelago called Althandar, the pure-blood First Human who is now called as Skyrean, inhabit six nations that naturally hostile to one another. Diaclou with its Eisenclad Army is the only nation that remains neutral since it has complete control over the Elemantra Particles and doesn't need to triumph over industrialized powers.
STORY
Excessively afraid of the grave threats of human supremacy over the past centuries, the majority of Skyrean from Althandar decided to form an alliance with the Daegon Clan from Juheimhen in order to obliterate every single human ambassadors that was seen during the Kings Gathering in the Axis of the Three Worlds of Existence.
Without their champions, the humankind lost every hope to fight back. Their kingdoms fell and million people perished during the war for dominance. Those who survived the war being enslaved by the Skyrean, meanwhile, the demons from Juheimhen substitute themself in human's place to rule over the lands.
The story centers on Lucain, a member of Eisenclad Army's elite group that existed for the sole purpose of destroying the last remnants of human civilization. And the one who adamantly opposed the army, Maegarf.
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I deeply thank you for helping me with the game descriptions all this time. :)
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SETTING
Set on a sky archipelago called Althandar, the pure-blood First Human who is now called as Skyrean, inhabit six nations that naturally hostile to one another. Diaclou with its Eisenclad Army is the only nation that remains neutral since it has complete control over the Elemantra Particles and doesn't need to triumph over industrialized powers.
STORY
Excessively afraid of the grave threats of human supremacy over the past centuries, the majority of Skyrean from Althandar decided to form an alliance with the Daegon Clan from Juheimhen in order to obliterate every single human ambassadors that was seen during the Kings Gathering in the Axis of the Three Worlds of Existence.
Without their champions, the humankind lost every hope to fight back. Their kingdoms fell and million people perished during the war for dominance. Those who survived the war being enslaved by the Skyrean, meanwhile, the demons from Juheimhen substitute themself in human's place to rule over the lands.
The story centers on Lucain, a member of Eisenclad Army's elite group that existed for the sole purpose of destroying the last remnants of human civilization. And the one who adamantly opposed the army, Maegarf.
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I deeply thank you for helping me with the game descriptions all this time. :)
Let's work on your game descriptions!
author=Marrend
I would tend toward the first option, myself. Though, maybe...In Lazim, as Maegraf marches toward his goal, he finds himself in the middle of a war between the four greatest military forces of the Sky-islands.
...that might work too?
Ah i see. Yes, that worked and pleasant to read. Thanks a lot! :)
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Thanks a lot!
*Lazim is the name of a city, not a person, so, can I change the sentence like this :
Even as Maegraf marches toward his goal, he finds himself in the middle of a war between the four greatest military forces of the Sky-islands
or this one :
On the other hand, Maegarf Thal who leads the Stranded Heroes, finds himself in the middle of a war between the four greatest military forces of the Sky-Islands.
*Lazim is the name of a city, not a person, so, can I change the sentence like this :
Even as Maegraf marches toward his goal, he finds himself in the middle of a war between the four greatest military forces of the Sky-islands
or this one :
On the other hand, Maegarf Thal who leads the Stranded Heroes, finds himself in the middle of a war between the four greatest military forces of the Sky-Islands.
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Hi Marrend, it's been a while. :) I need your help ( again >_< ) with this one :
++SETTING++
God Realm refers to highest educational academy in Diaclou Sky Kingdom, resides on the outskirts of Diaclou Island, the largest floating island in the sky. Founded by the First Human, this institution trains candidates in hopes of becoming the Avelions, a group of trained men adept in Elmsh Mantra that combat the Fallen Fairies from Althandr Dimens (Divine World) and Stranded Heroes from Sheidh Dimens (Mortal World). Armed with magic devices and astral armor, the Avelions patrol their respective territories to destroy the enemy that comes from "above" and "under" the sky.
++PLOT++
Lucain Garveil is a Bronze Astral Armor wearer who trains and lives at Teirra Haven, a famous God Realm in Teirra. At the Realm, he learns Elmsh Mantra, a substantial elemental magic in preparation for a team mission : kill Maegarf Thal,a former Avelion who had betrayed the Sky Kingdom and currently leads the Stranded Heroes in the Northern Sky. Rumor says, Maegarf travels in time to fulfill all the Demon Wishes that was written in the Lost Testament, the unbreakable ancient scroll he stole from the Sky Kingdom.
On the other hand, Maegarf Thal, who brings the Lost Testament with him, leads his troops to conquer the city of the deads, Lazim, in the middle of a multi-sided war between the four greatest military forces in the sky. He tries to assert the authority of local religious zealots as he uncovers the secret of Demon Wishes and find the truth behind the murder of Lord Eiriou, former Leader of Stranded Heroes.
Eventually, as the two begin to engage each other more directly, a string of bizzare events related to Lucain and Maegarf begins shaking the entire Sky Islands. A mysterious entity called Zreck Historia that came from the world that lies beyond the sky rift distorts the fate of the two and stretches their credulity to the utmost. The dark one becomes a hope and the holy one brings the ultimate despair...
++FEATURES++
STORY DRIVEN MISSION with ACTIVE CHARACTER SHIFT
You'll play two different groups throughout the main mission and may switch between the two party leaders when you get a flash message. This feature is optional though, as it gives the player the ability to view other perspectives that are happening at the same time elsewhere in the sky continents. You'll have a full-risk decision making based on these perspectives.
ELMSH MANTRA MECHANISM
You can install 361 different Elmsh Stone on your Elmsh Caster device. The stone will grant its user with various Elmsh Mantra that can be used in a battle, or reproduce specific mantra that can only be conjured by a character proficient in that type of mantra spell to interact with object / person outside the battles.
DEEPER STATS BUILD + VIRTUAL TRAINER
You can build unique stats : Leadership, Social Threads, Engineering, etc. You can also do various things to increase these unique stats. For example, to train your Leadership, you have to make the right decision during a mission. You will need to either study or take a class to increase Mantra Power, etc. Your stats are not enhanced through repetitive training, and is only affected by your actions throughout the gameplay.
DAILY ACTIVITIES & CALENDAR SYSTEM
You need to sleep at night to restore your Action Points and have 3 meals per day to keep your AP in a prime regen rate. You'll also find different activities in each city/academy : magic trainings, doing exams & ranking duels, attending special events, gardening (growing plants), part-time jobs and side-missions while not doing your main mission. Most activities will be affected by the time system.
I wrote the game description carefully and yet, I guess it still has a lot of mistakes in it and feels a little bit unpleasant to read. Sorry for a long description. Thanks a lot! :)
++SETTING++
God Realm refers to highest educational academy in Diaclou Sky Kingdom, resides on the outskirts of Diaclou Island, the largest floating island in the sky. Founded by the First Human, this institution trains candidates in hopes of becoming the Avelions, a group of trained men adept in Elmsh Mantra that combat the Fallen Fairies from Althandr Dimens (Divine World) and Stranded Heroes from Sheidh Dimens (Mortal World). Armed with magic devices and astral armor, the Avelions patrol their respective territories to destroy the enemy that comes from "above" and "under" the sky.
++PLOT++
Lucain Garveil is a Bronze Astral Armor wearer who trains and lives at Teirra Haven, a famous God Realm in Teirra. At the Realm, he learns Elmsh Mantra, a substantial elemental magic in preparation for a team mission : kill Maegarf Thal,a former Avelion who had betrayed the Sky Kingdom and currently leads the Stranded Heroes in the Northern Sky. Rumor says, Maegarf travels in time to fulfill all the Demon Wishes that was written in the Lost Testament, the unbreakable ancient scroll he stole from the Sky Kingdom.
On the other hand, Maegarf Thal, who brings the Lost Testament with him, leads his troops to conquer the city of the deads, Lazim, in the middle of a multi-sided war between the four greatest military forces in the sky. He tries to assert the authority of local religious zealots as he uncovers the secret of Demon Wishes and find the truth behind the murder of Lord Eiriou, former Leader of Stranded Heroes.
Eventually, as the two begin to engage each other more directly, a string of bizzare events related to Lucain and Maegarf begins shaking the entire Sky Islands. A mysterious entity called Zreck Historia that came from the world that lies beyond the sky rift distorts the fate of the two and stretches their credulity to the utmost. The dark one becomes a hope and the holy one brings the ultimate despair...
++FEATURES++
STORY DRIVEN MISSION with ACTIVE CHARACTER SHIFT
You'll play two different groups throughout the main mission and may switch between the two party leaders when you get a flash message. This feature is optional though, as it gives the player the ability to view other perspectives that are happening at the same time elsewhere in the sky continents. You'll have a full-risk decision making based on these perspectives.
ELMSH MANTRA MECHANISM
You can install 361 different Elmsh Stone on your Elmsh Caster device. The stone will grant its user with various Elmsh Mantra that can be used in a battle, or reproduce specific mantra that can only be conjured by a character proficient in that type of mantra spell to interact with object / person outside the battles.
DEEPER STATS BUILD + VIRTUAL TRAINER
You can build unique stats : Leadership, Social Threads, Engineering, etc. You can also do various things to increase these unique stats. For example, to train your Leadership, you have to make the right decision during a mission. You will need to either study or take a class to increase Mantra Power, etc. Your stats are not enhanced through repetitive training, and is only affected by your actions throughout the gameplay.
DAILY ACTIVITIES & CALENDAR SYSTEM
You need to sleep at night to restore your Action Points and have 3 meals per day to keep your AP in a prime regen rate. You'll also find different activities in each city/academy : magic trainings, doing exams & ranking duels, attending special events, gardening (growing plants), part-time jobs and side-missions while not doing your main mission. Most activities will be affected by the time system.
I wrote the game description carefully and yet, I guess it still has a lot of mistakes in it and feels a little bit unpleasant to read. Sorry for a long description. Thanks a lot! :)
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