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Let's work on your game descriptions!

ah i got it, thanks alot.
im going to fix it on other sites too,
I feel happy and ashamed at the same.haha XD

it becomes like this

Stories of Sheidh IV - Oracion Memoirs
Cradth Helverd Projects.


+Game description+
A simple action-RPG, similar to such classics as Castlevania and The Legend of Zelda, only with more MMORPG elements. Such as a job/class system, a main quest, sub-quests and a more free-roaming-style RPG.

+Story+
This story centers on the journey of formerly high ranked military commander, Eiriou Finrouced, who attempted to kill a member of the Epsylian Council, and became the nation's most wanted criminal. He believes the council may be hatching a plot called Reservoir to take control over the continent of Reigeia.

Meanwhile, his brother, Prince Seive X.Dalradvent, heir to the throne, disappears and is suspected of being a traitor who is scheming to bring about a chaotic revolution at Gerrand, the capital city of Epsylia, codenamed Anti Reservoir.

All the while, the nine symbols of peace -the ancient weapons- are disappearing one by one. Rumors abound that they were taken by a demon. Regardless of how true such rumors are, fear of what would occur if they all disappear is prevalent throughout the six kingdoms of Reigeia.

This is a story of two Wind Swordsmen, Seive and Eiriou, two fugitives on their separate paths to put an end into Reservoir and overcome the awakened mythical power that lies beyond...

+Feature+
3 GAME MODES ( Normal Mode, God Mode, and Hellgate Mode! )
20~30 HOURS OF GAMEPLAY ( A great journey in Reigeia! )
ACTION BATTLE SYSTEM ( No random encounters, fight all enemies on the map! )
7 PLAYABLE CHARACTERS ( 4 Main Characters, and 3 Side Characters to play! )
30 UNIQUE JOBS/CLASSES ( 7 Basic Class, 13 Advance Class, 9 Legion Class, and 1 Secret Class to choose! )
300+ DIFFERENT SKILLS ( Personal Skills, Class Skills, Talent, Special Skills! )
700+ PIECES OF EQUIPMENT ( Hundreds of weapons and armors to collect! )
100+ VARIOUS MONSTERS ( Beat them all and become a legendary warrior! )
40+ VARIOUS QUESTS ( There are many side-quests all over the continent! )
ALIGNMENT SYSTEM ( Be a good hero or a bad guy, It's your choice! )
DAY AND NIGHT SYSTEM ( People sleep and shops are closed at night, so plan accordingly! )
STORAGE SYSTEM ( Keep or leave your items in a vault! Your inventory is limited, so be wise! )
6 FACTIONS, 4 ALTERNATE ENDINGS ( Help/ignore people to add faction points and decide your ending! )
OPEN WORLD - FREE ROAMING ( Feel free to explore the continent!! )
HOME DECORATING ( Buy a house or a villa, and some additional furniture! )
FARMING ( Buy seeds and grow crops for more cash! )
CRAFTING ( Create your own items and weapons! )
COOKING ( Cook your food and discover new recipes! )
FISHING ( Sail the sea or find a fishing spot to get items and fish! )
CHAMPION ARENA ( Test your might and be the champion! )



Let's work on your game descriptions!

author=Marrend
...Dairgaaz, how did I fail to connect that the two brothers that are mentioned early are the same people as the fugitives mentioned later on?

*Edit: Do you really need that "-END-" at the end?

ah sorry my bad,
i had no intention when put that -END- at the end.
just finished my post and dunno why, i typed it. lol

edited* after read nhubi corrections,
so is it right, this time? the full public profile will be


Stories of Sheidh IV - Oracion Memoirs
Cradth Helverd Projects.


+Game description+

A simple action-RPG, similar to such classics as Castlevania and The Legend of Zelda, only with more MMORPG elements. Such as a job/class system, a main quest, sub-quests and a more free-roaming-style RPG.


+Story+

This story centers on the journey of formerly high ranked military commander, Eiriou Finrouced, who attempted to kill a member of the Epsylian Council, and became the nation's most wanted criminal. He believes the council may be hatching a plot called Reservoir to take control over the continent of Reigeia.

Meanwhile, his brother, Prince Seive X.Dalradvent, heir to the throne, disappears and is suspected of being a traitor who is scheming to bring about a chaotic revolution at Gerrand, the capital city of Epsylia, codenamed Anti Reservoir.

All the while, the nine symbols of peace -the ancient weapons- are disappearing one by one. Rumors abound that they were taken by a demon. Regardless of how true such rumors are, fear of what would occur if they all disappear is prevalent throughout the six kingdoms of Reigeia.

This is a story of two Wind Swordsmen, Seive and Eiriou, two fugitives on their separate paths to put an end into Reservoir and overcome the awakened mythical power that lies beyond...


+Features+

+ 3 GAME MODES ( Normal Mode, God Mode, and Hellgate Mode! )
+ 20~30 HOURS OF GAMEPLAY ( A great journey in Reigeia! )
+ ACTION BATTLE SYSTEM ( No random encounters, fight all enemies on the Map! )
+ 7 PLAYABLE CHARACTERS ( 4 Main Characters, dan 3 Side Characters to play! )
+ 30 UNIQUE JOBS/CLASSES ( 7 Basic Class, 13 Advance Class, 9 Legion Class, dan 1 Secret Class to choose! )
+ 300+ VARIOUS SKILLS ( Personal Skills, Class Skills, Talent, Special Skills, Enemy Skills! )
+ 700+ VARIOUS EQUIPMENTS ( Hundreds weapons & armors to collect! )
+ 100+ VARIOUS MONSTERS ( Beat em all and become a legendary warrior! )
+ 40+ VARIOUS QUEST ( There are many sub-quest all over the continent! )
+ ALIGNMENT SYSTEM ( Be a good hero or a bad guys?! It's your choice! )
+ DAY AND NIGHT SYSTEM ( People are sleep and shops are closed at night, think your time management! )
+ STORAGE SYSTEM ( Keep or leave your stuffs in some vaults! Your inventory is limited, be wise! )
+ 6 FACTIONS, 4 ALTERNATE ENDING ( Help/ignore the people to add faction point and decide your ending! )
+ OPEN WORLD - FREE ROAMING ( Feels free to explore the continent! )
+ HOME DECORATING ( Buy a house, villa, and some additional furnitures! )
+ FARMING ( Buy seeds and grow your plants for more cash! )
+ CRAFTING ( Create your own items and weapons! )
+ COOKING ( Cook your foods and find all recipes! )
+ FISHING ( Sail the sea or find a fishing spot to get items and fishes! )
+ CHAMPION ARENA ( Test your might and be the champion! )



+Download+

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for a game demo and Full version of the game,

Let's work on your game descriptions!

@CashmeerCat,
thank you so much,
no wonder, my submission got rejected. XD

@nhubi,
thanks for more corrections. :)
i really appreciate it.

they are brothers but not blood related.
Eiriou was adopted and act more like a bodyguard
though the two were close to each other.

another mistake, name is eiriou finhrouced,
i put "curadhou" as his title (like sir/lord), I'll fix it,
it's too confusing to read.

@Marrend,
yes, you guess it right,
they are brothers but not blood related. :)

that's a good idea, I think I should put another line,
to connect between the two matters here.


How about this :


Game description
A simple action-RPG, similar to such classics as Castlevania and The Legend of Zelda, only with more MMORPG elements. Such as a job/class system, a main quest, sub-quests and a more free-roaming-style RPG.

Story
This story centers on the journey of formerly high ranked military commander, Eiriou Finrouced, who had attempted to kill a member of the Epsylian Council, and had become the nation's most wanted criminal. He believes the council, may be hatching a plot called Reservoir to take control over the continent of Reigeia by wars and massacres.

Meanwhile, his brother, Prince Seive X.Dalradvent, heir to the throne, disappears and is suspected of being a traitor who is scheming a chaotic revolution at Gerrand, the capital city of Epsylia, codenamed Anti Reservoir.

All the while, the nine symbols of peace -the ancient weapons- are disappearing one by one. Rumors abound that they were taken by a demon... Regardless of how true such rumors are, fear of what would occur if they all disappear is prevalent throughout all the six kingdoms of Reigeia.

This is a story of two Wind Swordsmen, Seive and Eiriou, the two fugitives on their separate paths, to put an end into Reservoir and overcome the awakened mythical power beyond...



-END-


XD

Let's work on your game descriptions!

hi everyone,
I need a help to correct my game description,
there are grammar issue and stuff, pls help me.

link :
http://rpgmaker.net/games/7631/


-GAME DESCRIPTION-

++GAME DESCRIPTION++
A Simple Action-RPG, similar to Castlevania/Zelda classic with more MMORPG elements, like jobs/classes system, main quesst, sub quests and free roam style-RPG.

++STORY++
The main story tells about the journey of an ex-high ranked military commander-Curadhou Eiriou, the man who attempted to kill a member of Epsylian Council and became the most wanted criminal...

Meanwhile his brother, Prince Seive Xaverio Dalradvent, heir to the throne, was disappeared and suspected as a traitor who scheming an Anti Reservoir, a chaotic revolution at Gerrand, the capital city of the kingdom.

All happens while the nine symbols of the peace, the ancient weapons, are disappearing one by one...took by a demon...Fears are bestow upon the Reigeia...

This is a story of two Wind Swordman, Seive and Eiriou...the two fugitives on their seperate ways to overcome the awakens mythical power beyond...

-END OF GAME DESCRIPTION-



thanks alot. :)
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