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Re & Apophis
An RPG, which takes place in ancient Egypt.

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Game's release ~June 2016

Thanks for your respond, Dyhalto.
I have found someone who will do the proofreading by now, so it won't be necessary for you to proofread.
Thanks for your offer, though. Especially under the perspective that you absolutely don't want to do it. :)

Has anybody played the game?

author=Dyhalto
hah! Upgraded Sobek's kilt kind of looks like a diaper x)
xD

author=Dyhalto
Since the beginning of time,
Good has clashed with Evil.

In order to rise again as the mighty sun itself,
Re must undertake a dangerous quest; an ordeal
through the Duat which lasts 12 hours.

In the 7th hour, Chaos incarnate itself appears.
The great serpent known as Apophis
attempts to thwart Re's objective.

Since the beginning of time,
Apophis gets decapitated every night.

Since the beginning of time,
Apophis reincarnates and tries again.

But one day, Apophis broke this eternal loop
and went to Earth, to spread chaos aground.
Thanks! I was always confused by the "land went" line, but my proofreader said it was alright. "And" does make more sense, though.

author=Dyhalto
The game could use a failsafe system for providing players with puzzle hints. Remember in Metal Gear Solid how the Colonel would say during the Psycho Mantis fight "Snake, plug Controller 1 into Controller port 2" after dying like 30 fucking times? I know this from experience ._. In rooms that have hidden switches for example, count the number of times the player enters/exits the room and have a 'D' prompt appear where someone suggests "Let's try checking the walls".
I will think about it. I first thought about to set a timer for about 15 seconds or so.

author=Dyhalto
I forgot a nitpick : Seth's Super says "Seth won't be under control anymore" implying that he'll be in a Berserk-state, but he is controllable and even has new skills.
Oh, that is a leftover from the first demo, where Seth was indeed not controllable after usage of this skill.

Has anybody played the game?

Nice, then you can finish the demo. :)
Oh, could you please tell me the mistakes in the opening prologue?
My native English proofreader has rewritten much of my original opening text, mainly to kind of tighten it.

PS:

Didn't know that it was THAT simple to change it.^^

Has anybody played the game?

Thanks for your feedback, Dyhalto.
I will see what of your cons and nitpicks I can change for the full version. :)

The missing "h" in Pharaoh is just a little grammar error.
The thing about Re:
It seems that "Re" is more common in German, while "Ra" is more common in English.
The same extends to "Apophis" / "Apep".

About your problem:
Leave the underground and go in the temple again. If you use the door in the north in the first room, there is a waterfall in front of a door. Now that you have activated the switch in the room above, the barrier is gone and you can pass through the door and get the last orb. :)

Edit: If you have problems finding the way out of the underground:
The exit is in the east area.

Proofreader needed

Anybody interested?
~3500 words.

Seth's unleashed form

@Elder71:
Thanks for your comment.
Unfortunately it is static. Technically I could easily change the party member's positions. Do you think it looks a little bit better this way?

That's how you will see the party most of the time. Without Ammit most of the time, unless you summon it.
I guess that I know how you imagine it to be, I just don't wanted them to stay too far away from each other. I mean, they are something like an united front. ;)

@GreatRedSpirit:
Thanks. :)

Re & Apophis maintheme

Don't worry, I will use it ingame, too.^^

Little something for you

New pictures in march!

Oh, sorry for that.

Yeah, the speech bubbles are just pictures. I create them with ms paint, which is pretty simple because you can create them in every size in a second. The texts are
-as you can think- also written with paint then.
But as I wrote in the game presentation, the game won't have that much text 'cause I want to lay more focus on gameplay. Also this will be easier for a non native English speaker.^^

New pictures in march!

Hey GreatRed Spirit,
thanks for leaving a comment.
First I myself thought "Re" sounds pretty strange because I also heard "Ra" everywhere. But now I like "Re" even better. German Wikipedia btw. says: Re (or Ra)... While in English Wikipedia it says: Ra or Re... So the complete opposite. :D
American technical death metal band Nile (one inspiration for the game) call him sometimes Ra and sometimes Re.

Hope I won't disappoint you, especially when it is true that you're from Egypt. ;)
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