JAI2016'S PROFILE

Ok TWICE my game has been denied due to grammar and structure, there are no grammar problems as I see here, so any ideas from anyone please?


STORY

Himeko and Kujiro have been in love for 5 years, they both study at one of Japan's top universities.

To celebrate their 5 year anniversary, they decided to take a walk through the forest just outside of Tokyo city, awaiting for their booking at a nearby restaurant in Tokyo itself, a private time and relaxation were what they wanted for a long time since their final exams are coming up.

Kujiro's romance knew no bounds as he was very hungry and wanted to leave for the restaurant, where Himeko, happily agreed.

Kujiro knew the forest path well, but something strange had happened, he usually walks through this exact path to reach his girlfriend's house, only this time, an eerie looking old house seemed to just "appear" out of nowhere. Kujiro's confusion quickly had turned to curiosity, after persuading Himeko, who was against his decision, agreed to check inside the house before heading to the restaurant.

This was their deepest mistake.

FEATURES
- A dark and disturbing story.
- A unique battle system inspired by the Fatal Frame AKA Project Zero series.
- A J-Horror inspired game.
- Amazing music by ChainL!nkz and Aaron Krogh.
- Atmospheric ambiance by TECMO, KOEI.
- Only 40 - 50 mins gameplay.

author=kory_toombs
The event makes it look like you are showing a picture, not a parallax.
They are different things.

If you want to see the parallax, you need to put the file in that folder. Then in map options show parallax. Unless you mean picture.

Edit:

Also shouldn't the image be shown whether the player is moving or not. Because as it is the image will only first appear when the player first presses the button.


Edit/Edit:

Better option is to scroll screen 1 time perhaps.

Yea I see where I went wrong there, Yes I want to picture to move with the camera preferably, but your solution is better, I'll try to sort it out, thanks. :)

I THINK Sin means to remix it down into a 27 second track from 1 min, or cut it down?

Fully understandable and yea, it would be best once I fully finish the game it can be much clearer for me to get opinions and advice before fully releasing it for any touch ups that needed. thanks again.

Ok well thats me done with your site for submitting a game, you constantly deny my submission even though I've seen others much worst than mine getting through successfully, whether be it description or pics. I'll just finish my game and then post if on another site.