MACBLO'S PROFILE

Grammer Errors

Astral Plane Area 1

Cloaked Figure
"Long time ago I haven't been visited by a human in this 
place" should probably be "Its been a long time since I've 
been visited by a human in this place."

Astral Plane Area 3
When you say "The red ones usually has objects that will
help you to recover your HP and status." I think it should
be "The red ones will usually contain objects that help
you recover HP and Statuses."

When you say "Don't forget to equip them on," you can
drop the "on" so that it just becomes "Don't forget to
equip them." 

Astral Plane Area 5
When Lina says "How can I make it work," it would sound
nicer if you exchanged the "can" for a "do."

When the stranger says "Is the only way you can do it,"
it would sound nicer if you put "Its the only way you
can do it."

When the stranger says "I won't be a difficult opponent.
Not even an easy one," Is he saying something along the 
lines of "He's not difficult, but don't expect an easy
fight?"

House your in after the Astral Plane
When the old man says "Before you leave, got to the basement,"
it should be "Before you leave, go to the basement,"

Second visit to the Astral Plane

When the stranger says "it is a probable," I think you
mean "it is a probability."

When he says "this has been everything for today," It should
go like "that is all for today."

When he says "That's what I'm ordered to," Your missing the
"do" at the end of the sentence. It should be "That's what
I'm ordered to do."
When the stranger says "You can't attack by a number
of turns." change the "by" to a "for"

Battle
Miembros is still in Spanish. I con't recall at the moment
what that command is called in english though.

When the game is telling me that I defeated the enemy, its
still in spanish.

Misc Errors
You didn't change "Si" to "Yes"

In the first house, the brick walls with the wood roof looks
really...weird.