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MOMOKA (IGMC 2018)

author=Miryafa
Congrats on completing your first game! I like the title screen! And I just gave this a try. But my gosh - there was too much text. Please remember the authors' lesson: show, don't tell. The first time, when you told us Momoka was blindfolded, it was alright to an extent - but even then please be cautious with how many words you use in a game.


Thank you for playing my game! I'm sorry that you felt that way about the word count. I didn't think that it was too much, and this is the first time hearing that there was too many words, but I'll keep this in mind for the full version. Thank you again!

MOMOKA (IGMC 2018)

author=bicfarmer
u should probably include sexual warnings


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author=InfectionFiles
I really like the sound of the story and overall looks like a tight little game. Best of luck!

Edit: Congrats on completed!


Thank you, hope you enjoy it.
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