MRSTINKYFEET'S PROFILE

"he had gone crazy and did something terrible!"

switch to game play do some events to flesh out character and kill wife in this example

" yes, he killed the one he loved and all out of rage...he wanted revenge'


this is a good example of 3rd person narration
this is showing AND telling I believe you have to do both

My villian just wants to hang out with his older brother but since he knows that won't happen he causes mischief in Light Town which his brother investigates until finally he figures out it's his little brother.