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Lost Story

looks amazing

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OMG!!! I made front page :)

love you guys feedback

author=Noel_Kreiss
Since you're at it, I'd like to ask to make field maps smaller and more consistent with door-type points (that huge swamp/desert/something place in the second character's story where we get a kid and his sister has large, very large maps which make enjoying the game pain in the ass; and by "consistent door-type points" I mean that you go to the right edge of map and suddenly end up facing up and it really confuses).

Also, battle balance is hella bad, like no matter the character role, all characters have similar max HP at all levels, but other stats appear to be better balanced. Also, MP costs for some skills are just way too high: you're doing the MP costs as you feel like forced to give these 9999 max MP to the party, but it's just plain stupid. And then there's this "Self-Heal" skill which IMO is completely unnecessary and you could just have Heal skill which the player would use to heal any party member they desire to heal. And monsters feel really unbalanced; like the boss in the desert thing with the siblings and you pretty much waste your resources (MP and items) to keep yourself alive.

If you're working alone, I advise you to get some help as there's so much potential here, but numerous grammatical errors and lack of combat balance will certainly not earn you a lot of fans and recognition.


yeah I'm working completely alone, but thanks to your feed back all those issues are being tackled as we speak. I tried to make combat challenging think I went over board and I have removed the enormous mapping scale I had made it more compact.

Eternal Odyssey

author=Noel_Kreiss
You definitely need a proofreader. Correct punctuation, minor dialogues rewrites, and reduction of pauses here and there will certainly improve the game (I noticed you mitakenly used "orgasm" to fere to "organism"). Despite that, the story is quite easy to understand.
The beginning reminded me of Final Fantasy VIII's beginning, and Oni and Mia's relationship appears to be tangled relationship of Squall and Quistis.

I also noticed you threw quote a lot of references to various franchises (the ones that stood out most to me where Zack and Tidus, as well as Pok├ęballs).

Please get rid of the saving script as it unnecesarilly lenghtens the saving progress and it personally kinds of discourages to save the progress.

Totally agree I was planning on removing it and great insight of the relationship I have alot of inspiration from those titles.

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You did really well

[C] - The Money of Soul and Possibility Control

Looks amazing now Im definatly ready

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Oh dear brother this looks amazing

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author=nhubi
That should be you're, not your.
you are like a personal spell check system lol

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author=nhubi
You need to change the MANA Power and MANA Defence to a smaller acronym, like MPwr and MDF or make the stats further right because the overlap just looks messy. You could also increase the size of the stats box as the equip box has quite a bit of room to the left, and could be reduced easily.


yes you are correct will do