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Someone who can translate from Spanish to english?
umm I'm not sure if this is the place to write this, but yeah.
As I post on my game page:
I made a demo for my game.
So My english is not enough, since english is not my first language... So well.. The dialogues makes no sense sometimes... So i'm not sure...
So, if anyone, has time, and wants to translate a story-focused game. Please tell me! I think is a good game by the way. Thank youu :D