A "COLLAPSE" SOUND EFFECT.

Hello RMN-ers, I wanted to share a small sound effect I patched up from several others I found lying around in my computer.

This is my first piece, and I would like to hear some constructive criticism:
http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/19624/locker/Collapse.wav

I used a program called "Free Audio Editor" , here's the site:
http://www.free-audio-editor.com/

NOTE :
If someone is interested in using or altering this, please notify me and credit me in your project.

Thanks! :)

Nope, I just needed one, so I used what I found lying around... I don't see how you can't listen to it...