I need remake this chars Topic

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12/10/2012 12:43 PM

Hi, I'm a brazilian guy and my english is so so.
I made 4 chars, but is my first chars. My chars are amateur and I need a professional touch in my chars. Please help me. Follow a links of my 4 chars, please and help me:
OBS: I don't want chibi size. I hate chibi chars... kkkkkk

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/22/aquav.png/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/4/ignish.png/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/21/animae.png/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/580/gaius.png/

Dyhalto

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12/12/2012 02:44 AM

They all look fine to me.
Your style is your style. It's refreshing to see people make their own graphics.

Shaddow

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12/12/2012 02:47 AM

I agree, this looks good, the only real thing you could do is add some shading for depth, you've got good style going on already and a great basis to work from.

LockeZ

I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.

5958

12/12/2012 08:47 PM

I disagree, the OP is right, these look quite amateurish. There is no shading, inconsistent outlining, and the movement is unnatural and stilted. Plus the faces look weird from the front (mostly the noses I think?). I am not capable of fixing it, but telling him it's not worth fixing is cruel, he'll end up with a better looking game if he improves these.

Martius

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12/12/2012 09:34 PM

Yes, I need make better my chars. It's good but is not so good :)
I want depth of traces, lightness in movement os hair and hatching in walk...
Do you understanding my poor english?

LockeZ

I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.

5958

12/12/2012 09:59 PM

Your english isn't good, but I get the idea.

I am lousy at sprite art, but I can link to a good tutorial on shading!

Read this.

Oh, and here's a tutorial on movement. finalbossblues.com has a lot of good tutorials, they're listed under Pixel Tutorials at the top of the site.

Shaddow

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12/12/2012 11:03 PM

I agree with LockeZ, while you could get someone to finish these up for you, it would help you a lot more to learn it yourself, that way when you have more characters, and I'm sure you will, you will not have to ask for help.

Danny

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12/19/2012 02:40 AM

author=Martius
Hi, I'm a brazilian guy and my english is so so.
I made 4 chars, but is my first chars. My chars are amateur and I need a professional touch in my chars. Please help me. Follow a links of my 4 chars, please and help me:
OBS: I don't want chibi size. I hate chibi chars... kkkkkk

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/22/aquav.png/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/4/ignish.png/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/21/animae.png/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/580/gaius.png/

Well, I don't see too much wrong with these sprites, if you made these, they're actually pretty good. But maybe you should change some of the eyes so they look different. I could help you with that if you want.
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Bem, eu não vejo muito de errado com esses sprites, se você fez isso, eles são realmente muito bons. Mas talvez você deve alterar alguns dos olhos para que eles fiquem diferentes. Eu poderia te ajudar com isso, se quiser.

I apologize if the Portuguese is bad, I used Google Translate. :P

I NEED REMAKE THIS CHARS

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