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CRAFTING SYSTEM I'M WORKING ON

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Tell me what you think so far I know much needs to be done but once it's all said and done I will explain how to get to where I have with the crafting if people want crafting systems in there games. Working on many projects But this is my main priority at this moment.
Trihan
"It's more like a big ball of wibbly wobbly...timey wimey...stuff."
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Looks like an interesting start. What exactly are you looking to accomplish by having a crafting system? Is this just a general-purpose thing for public use or do you intend to use it in a game of your own creation?
I was about to say "This kind of stuff belongs on your gameprofile", but then I took a look in the queue and sure-as-shit you have submitted a game. And dear lord it is awful. It is absolutely filled to the brim with spelling and grammar mistakes and run-on sentences. I am not surprised that it is not accepted.

Seriously, before pouring time and effort into a superfluous crafting system and "massive story cotent like baldurs gate" I suggest investing some time into learning how to convey your thoughts into coherent and comprehensible paragraphs. Seriously.


I know this might come across as perhaps soul-crushing and mean, but the blunt-honest truth is no one will be interested in your game if you can't effectively convey your ideas. And right now all I have seen from you is very haphazard and spastic - like you are brimming with every possible idea ever and barf it all out at once without direction or control.

Gain some perspective and a modicum of control and vision first.
I have a vistion already and yes a million things are poring that is also why it's in develpment state, yes the grammer will be fixed. Have you ever thought that I did not know the grammer was off i'm working on a million things at once I do more then one thing at once. Also I created as much cotent as I did already so that I have things to go over and correct.

It may not be the way some due there stuff but the end result is what the end result will be. I am not saying I have good grammer at all but I created many of those lines that I did in the game to make sure the events would work. It is in it's status for a reason and yes I know why they have not aprroved it first but I do work fast as I can when I can.

So say what you will about my game I really don't care the focus for me is end result not production status and the reason I put it up is that so people can see what I have done so far as content not in game grammer that comes later. I will map out my game first before writting the story and build all the crafting then fix the grammer.

Before you bash the mataerial of someone's work wait to see the end result or give propper advice otherwise it's useless. This is also my first major project as far as a game.
that's what I am saying.

People will not a give two-shits about what you put up until you work on your presentation. And sorry to say that means you have to work on your grammar and spelling. Until then the end result means fuck-all.

This advice I am giving you is the most proper advice you'll receive.
Hey gilgamesh, I heard Kentona knows a lot about this kind of thing. You might want to PM him.
author=Clyve
Hey gilgamesh, I heard Kentona knows a lot about this kind of thing. You might want to PM him.
I am going to kill you.
Well that's ok that just means when I work on my grammer my game will be closer to being done it will be aprroved so that's ok. But in the mean time I inted to still continue to upload videos of crafting systems and such and once there fully done I will share the information for others to use in game if they want.

And by no means do you need to curse this is not a serius matter. Clyve yes I know he does I have played his game and it's ok. I am not on this site to bash anyone or to be a troll. And I have not had any as of yet witch is good. He does things his way and if everyone on this site does what he does well that sound like robots. When I play a game or see a game in development I may say hey look there is this problem.

If he has ever beta tested a mmo then he would go on a spree of grammer issues. Trust me mmo's have many. Before there ever released and still have them even after that is why they do constant updates. This is a learning period of testing things out for my game not a intial release. I have to also make sure there is no glitches I find in many games.

author=Trihan
Looks like an interesting start. What exactly are you looking to accomplish by having a crafting system? Is this just a general-purpose thing for public use or do you intend to use it in a game of your own creation?


Oh sorry never replied it will be for both. But I will get all my systems done first so that others can use I still need to make a war system and that is the biggest pain.
author=giglamesh
I am not on this site to bash anyone or to be a troll.



Yeah... neither am I.
author=Clyve
author=giglamesh
I am not on this site to bash anyone or to be a troll.

Yeah... neither am I.

:) Don't forget trolls hate fire!!! Or was it ice?
Only robots appreciate good grammar. This is true.
lol you took that out of context, this is why people never read things the same way. It meant as in if every game elment was the same then it would be boring. If no won thought of new ideas what would be the point in making new games when the end result would be the same. If every president thought the same what would be the point in voting. If you still don't see the point, I am making then it's a good thing you never been in politics grammer would help but you would lose the debate.

I may not have the best grammer skills but I have been offerd leadership abillitys.
Obvious troll is... not so obvious in this case, but still detectable.
Learning proper spelling is paramount. After that, to have things not sound the same, there's something called informal or colloquial dialogue. In other words, certain characters have certain styles.

But you must attempt to maintain style, and not have formal characters slip into informal language (or vice versa). Inconsistency is just as bad as poor spelling, and having all characters sound the same is worse than both. Also, c'mon guys, give him a break, his name is giglamesh. He can't even spell his name right (obviously Gilgamesh).

Also, grammar. Not "grammer".
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
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I feel like telling someone to work on their grammar and spelling might be a lost cause when their username is misspelled
author=LockeZ
I feel like telling someone to work on their grammar and spelling might be a lost cause when their username is misspelled

It's not mispelled if I meant to do it. plus I started using it years ago becuase half the time it was already in use. So it's easy to just spell it this way no chance in someone having it that way. No one ever sees it for being that way.
Well it's ok lol I will ride this train of trollin, until people finally think. It's funny know one ever asks why I do the things I do. Rather then say soul train I will start saying troll train. :) Oh I forgot gig does mean something I forgot why it's kinda like my name on xbox darkwolf9ball 9ball is a boss in a old game darkwolf well it's from something else.
author=giglamesh
It's funny know one ever asks why I do the things I do.
it's because no one knows what you're saying.
author=kentona
Only robots appreciate good grammar. This is true.


Hence my programming. :)

It seems to be a waste to put all your time and effort into a craft system that isn't going to be accepted, due to your grammar.

Maybe I'm stepping into a landmine, but I'll make you an offer Giglamesh (though the spelling should be Gilgamesh). Send me a copy of your game and I might be willing to fix some of your spelling and structure issues.

However, I'm currently judging an event, so I won't be able to do that immediately.

If you accept my offer, send me a private message.

Also, don't get upset with Kentona and anyone else on here. If he was to let your game go through on the site with the poor spelling in tact, people would take it out on you in the reviews.

Learn to accept constructive criticism and you'll go a long way in any endeavor.
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