WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT MY GAME (YOUTUBE PLAYTHROUGH INSIDE)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oKCoDJviydo

hey, I've been spending the last couple weeks making a prolouge to my game "momquest: the legendary adventure". Any feedback, like of the mapping or eventing/writing would be welcome... Maybe this is the wrong place for this but I didn't want to make a page and put up a game yet if I'm not going to continue it too far... I try to make the dialog silly... basically is it something you would want to play?

Thanks for your input!

Bwoltz