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Closehey all i just started and i figered out (on my own) very proud of that :) how to script a land vehical currently pending the tutoriul i wrote but i just started useing gimp and made a fire sage face graphic (off the pre excisting spirtul one :})
i was wanting to know if it was good for a novice game makers game (not comercial realease when its done is what i mean :}) please let me know and feel free to be harsh on your critiqes i wont get better if i dont know what to improve :) thank you in advance all who reply
here it is :)
hey i just got done on my second attempt is this one better?
>.< i forgot to do the eyebrows lol
there i think thats right :)
oh and i caught what marrend meant about hacked but to be honest i would actually take that as a compliment (if you do and give me credit would be nice but not a true requirement plus this forum page as long as its up proves whose is the true one cause of time stamp) but all the feed back during my "run into it head first sink/swim type approach to things iv never done or thought of or anything before approach" lol so the more criticism there is no mater how harsh helps me out greatly and is greatly appreciated and thanks to those who have already helped and hopefully those who will post and help (if i break a rule or mess up grammar to bad i am sorry i know how to spell to an extent "why i have brother to proof read sometimes ;)" i sound out words to spell them and the silents mess with me sorry in advance) any tutorials, scripts, or anything else i submit though will be gone over by a proof reader to make sure grammar punctuation's and all that is correct so please do not judge me on my posts alone :)
heres another one im working with oh do you think i should submit any of these as a resource?
i was wanting to know if it was good for a novice game makers game (not comercial realease when its done is what i mean :}) please let me know and feel free to be harsh on your critiqes i wont get better if i dont know what to improve :) thank you in advance all who reply
here it is :)
hey i just got done on my second attempt is this one better?
>.< i forgot to do the eyebrows lol
there i think thats right :)
oh and i caught what marrend meant about hacked but to be honest i would actually take that as a compliment (if you do and give me credit would be nice but not a true requirement plus this forum page as long as its up proves whose is the true one cause of time stamp) but all the feed back during my "run into it head first sink/swim type approach to things iv never done or thought of or anything before approach" lol so the more criticism there is no mater how harsh helps me out greatly and is greatly appreciated and thanks to those who have already helped and hopefully those who will post and help (if i break a rule or mess up grammar to bad i am sorry i know how to spell to an extent "why i have brother to proof read sometimes ;)" i sound out words to spell them and the silents mess with me sorry in advance) any tutorials, scripts, or anything else i submit though will be gone over by a proof reader to make sure grammar punctuation's and all that is correct so please do not judge me on my posts alone :)
heres another one im working with oh do you think i should submit any of these as a resource?
My main beef is how you inserted the mouth, though, the beard could have been more natural. My own hack attempt...
...is more like the kind of thing I would be more comfortable withif it wasn't an obvious hack attempt.
...is more like the kind of thing I would be more comfortable with
nurvuss
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It's not *horrible* but it really looks like you took MSPaint to it. The lines clash really obviously. Marrend's got the right idea with the softer lines.
TheNecromancer
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His head is facing off to the side, but his mouth isn't. And if you wrote a tutorial with that level of grammar and spelling, it will be denied.
thank you all how do you do the softer lines in gimp? i was wanting to just do a light black line for the mouth but im still learning. and the tutorial i spell checked before i submitted i write fast and then look over a project but on postts i have a bad habit of clicking submit right away :) oh and i by no means a hacker i used the vx ace face graphic that came with the program
sorry bout the double post
sorry bout the double post
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