[RMVX ACE] NEED SOMEONE TEST MY GAME

Hey everyone, I've been developing a game for while now, and I would like your opinion on the game. It a very short demo, with about 10 minute of playtime(It more like a playable teaser then a demo)and I would love to get your opinion on what I should changed.

Question:

The demo only 10 minute, I thought you said you worked on it for a while?

The game was actually close to being completed but the story felt a bit cliche as I was looking to create a game with darker tone. So I scrap it and started redoing it from scratch.

You haven't told us the story of the game yet?

Yes, because I like to keep it, more of a secret and I don't feel confident in creating a page with such limited content.

Are you working by yourself or with a team?

As of now I've been doing all the work by myself but I would love to work with a good dialogue writer and mapper as my mapping and dialogue skill or not the best..