NEW GAME, LOOKING FOR CRITIQUES AND SUGGESTIONS PLEASE!

As the title reads, I'm working on a new RPG. I've dabbled with RPG Maker since RPG Maker 2000. I love the game, and have always wanted to tell a story in the form of an RPG.

I'm not a writer, more of a programmer. So my strong suit is not graphics or mapping, but learning code. In the process of learning by modifying scripts, reading code, etc.

What I've been doing is posting progress videos of my game. I'm going to post here, and hope you guys can take some time out of your day to give a fella some feedback.

thanks again in advance!


First Thread: http://www.reddit.com/r/RPGMaker/comments/2vovyc/8_minute_clip_of_the_game_i_am_creating_would/
Version 0.02: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mvEK3M1Aw7g
Version 0.03: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AfKF3Yu1hh0
Version 0.04 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PwxiCHvEsSc - Probably closer to an Intro sequence. Looking forward to everyone's suggestions / critiques!