I NEED SOME SYNTAX CHECK!

Hello!

So, I finished my first game yesterday and uploaded it as a beta version, with still so glitch and mistakes, and I would really need someone to check the typos, because there certainly are le lot of mistakes, english is not my first language.

The game details can be found here : http://rpgmaker.net/games/7705/

The game itself is really short,

Thank you very much !