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[RMVX ACE] HORROR GAME DESIGN "DEADLY" WORKING TITLE
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First Floor of the Mansion.
I was wondering if any would help me critique my design for this game.
Its basically your run of the mill horror game. Ghosts haunting a mansion and the character has a connection to it somehow.
Story
The Story resolves around Jack. An orphan who is revisiting the mansion where his entire family of six were killed. He begins to see corpse of people stowed away and their ghosts will attack him. He slowly begins to realize who the killer is.
Tell me what you think.
First Floor of the Mansion.
I was wondering if any would help me critique my design for this game.
Its basically your run of the mill horror game. Ghosts haunting a mansion and the character has a connection to it somehow.
Story
The Story resolves around Jack. An orphan who is revisiting the mansion where his entire family of six were killed. He begins to see corpse of people stowed away and their ghosts will attack him. He slowly begins to realize who the killer is.
Tell me what you think.
Dollsmaker
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i like the overall concept of it but i think you could change a few things
- the blood in the long middle room, if you imaging how blood spills out of something it wouldn't be that clean. it would be spatters, one thing i mite do would be to change the blood tilesets you use.
- the rooms i think would be best if you put them on different maps. This is only because if you had a monster waiting in a bathroom and it was meant to be a surprise,and you where on the outside it would be easy to see the monster waiting.
- i think it would also look better if you changed some of the floor tilesets used, and maybe the walls. Im just imagining how a mansion would look and to me it would be royal and regal, the one on the mapping looks a little bit cold and robotic
this is just my opinions tho and it mite not be what you want. it looks good tho, and i cant wait to give it a play ^^
- the blood in the long middle room, if you imaging how blood spills out of something it wouldn't be that clean. it would be spatters, one thing i mite do would be to change the blood tilesets you use.
- the rooms i think would be best if you put them on different maps. This is only because if you had a monster waiting in a bathroom and it was meant to be a surprise,and you where on the outside it would be easy to see the monster waiting.
- i think it would also look better if you changed some of the floor tilesets used, and maybe the walls. Im just imagining how a mansion would look and to me it would be royal and regal, the one on the mapping looks a little bit cold and robotic
this is just my opinions tho and it mite not be what you want. it looks good tho, and i cant wait to give it a play ^^
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