[DESIGN] REWARD DESIGN AND IDEAS
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So quick question. I'm preparing for my KickStarter and I want to have this update system where Pan has different expressions depending on the amount reached so far in the KS. I've just begun this morning:
Basically, I'm looking for ideas of other ''states''. The ''tiers'' are the following (each tier being revealed as the amounts are reached):
1,000 - Ok
2,000 - Ok
4,000 - ?
6,000 - ?
8,000 - ?
10,000 -?
12,000 -?
15,000 -?
So I'm basically looking for 6 other things. I'm thinking of Pan in a spa with some ''bread women'', Pan driving a luxury car... but I don't have a lot of ideas besides that. I thought I'd brainstorm with you guys.
I'm also looking for the most nitpicky of criticism about the characters themselves.
Also, how could I make the bricks of cash look less like bricks and more like stacks of cash? I've tried different things for more than one hour but couldn't get to anything conclusive.
Thank you for reading and commenting should you decide to do so.

Basically, I'm looking for ideas of other ''states''. The ''tiers'' are the following (each tier being revealed as the amounts are reached):
1,000 - Ok
2,000 - Ok
4,000 - ?
6,000 - ?
8,000 - ?
10,000 -?
12,000 -?
15,000 -?
So I'm basically looking for 6 other things. I'm thinking of Pan in a spa with some ''bread women'', Pan driving a luxury car... but I don't have a lot of ideas besides that. I thought I'd brainstorm with you guys.
I'm also looking for the most nitpicky of criticism about the characters themselves.
Also, how could I make the bricks of cash look less like bricks and more like stacks of cash? I've tried different things for more than one hour but couldn't get to anything conclusive.
Thank you for reading and commenting should you decide to do so.
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
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Homeless bread on a park bench
Bread in a cheap motel with a ceiling fan and holes in the walls
Bread living in mom's basement (...fridge drawer?)
Bread buying its first home (or fridge?)
Bread eating at a fancy italian restaraunt, waiter is a breadstick
Bread at spa, getting a butter patty smeared on his back by a hot muffin
Pimp bread wearing one of those fluffy marilyn monroe sashes in a convertible
Rich tuxedo bread putting its hand up to avoid cameras on the red carpet
Scrooge McBread diving into a giant vault of croutons
Bread in a cheap motel with a ceiling fan and holes in the walls
Bread living in mom's basement (...fridge drawer?)
Bread buying its first home (or fridge?)
Bread eating at a fancy italian restaraunt, waiter is a breadstick
Bread at spa, getting a butter patty smeared on his back by a hot muffin
Pimp bread wearing one of those fluffy marilyn monroe sashes in a convertible
Rich tuxedo bread putting its hand up to avoid cameras on the red carpet
Scrooge McBread diving into a giant vault of croutons
Alright so I redid the cash stack by using the ''paper band'' provided in Liberty's edit and added a few more statuses.
The park bench one is already there but I like the motel one, the spa one, the restaurant one and the red carpet one. Will likely do some of them if not all of them.
So I'm thinking of putting the cheap motel at 4,000$.
The park bench one is already there but I like the motel one, the spa one, the restaurant one and the red carpet one. Will likely do some of them if not all of them.

So I'm thinking of putting the cheap motel at 4,000$.
How about top tier being floating in space with a spaceship in the background?
Other ideas:
- Married with babby breads
- Rapper bread with bling
- Tuxedo bread with glass of champagne
- MxLonalds worker bread, flipping meat patties
- Superman bread/super hero bread
The bench bread could probably use a newspaper folded over the top of him for sleep/warmth purposes.
Other ideas:
- Married with babby breads
- Rapper bread with bling
- Tuxedo bread with glass of champagne
- MxLonalds worker bread, flipping meat patties
- Superman bread/super hero bread
The bench bread could probably use a newspaper folded over the top of him for sleep/warmth purposes.
I like the tuxedo one, will definitely put that in. I do feel like the Superhero one is somewhat not money related though unless I'm missing something.
Hello, Gredge109,
Well, the problem with the plane is that it's too big. I want to fit each tier in something fairly small. I could make the character smaller compared to the plane but then he wouldn't be recognizable.
I've added a fast food joint:
I'm thinking of removing the first level, the one with the bowl since it's too similar to the one on the bench. So I'm thinking of having the bench (I'll add the newspaper) as the first level.
Well, the problem with the plane is that it's too big. I want to fit each tier in something fairly small. I could make the character smaller compared to the plane but then he wouldn't be recognizable.
I've added a fast food joint:

I'm thinking of removing the first level, the one with the bowl since it's too similar to the one on the bench. So I'm thinking of having the bench (I'll add the newspaper) as the first level.
I don't really understand what the bowl one is trying to convey (that he has no food? it isnt very clear) so maybe removing it is a good idea.
I don't really understand what the bowl one is trying to convey (that he has no food? it isnt very clear) so maybe removing it is a good idea.
Well in certain countries people use bowls to receive alms. But I guess it's not very clear in my depiction.
Scrooge McDuck bread jumping into swimming pool of coins.
EDIT: sorry, answered too fast, someone beat me to it..
EDIT: sorry, answered too fast, someone beat me to it..
Hello Thunder176, how are you?
Yeah, it's been said already :). That's ok though! Must mean it's a very good suggestion!
@Liberty: Regarding the newspaper, I'm struggling. An edit would certainly help out to point me in the right direction :P.
Yeah, it's been said already :). That's ok though! Must mean it's a very good suggestion!
@Liberty: Regarding the newspaper, I'm struggling. An edit would certainly help out to point me in the right direction :P.
Hi Toast, doing fine, you?
may I just add in a side note that I absolutely love the silky smooth animation the toaster has :D
may I just add in a side note that I absolutely love the silky smooth animation the toaster has :D
Well thank you. That animation in your avatar looks neat too, don't know if you did it though!
Right, so I went ahead and did the spa:
So I have three spots left. Pretty sure I'll be doing the huge stack/scrooge thing. Still undecided for the last two. Maybe a sports car.
Bread at spa, getting a butter patty smeared on his back by a hot muffin
Right, so I went ahead and did the spa:

So I have three spots left. Pretty sure I'll be doing the huge stack/scrooge thing. Still undecided for the last two. Maybe a sports car.

Bump! Added a car, that one took a while.
Do you guys agree with the ladder, I mean, the order of the statuses. Maybe the desk should be lower down than the spa for one thing.



















