A NAME FOR MY GAME
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Hi, I'm Lucas.J and I'm actually making an rpg maker original game. I've got everything planned but I don't have a name yet !
Before I tell you a part of the story I have to say that the graphic is inspired from Earthbound/Mother !:
A boy named Zell, who is only 12 years old, had lost his mother at only 8 years old and his father, who is scientific and afraid of his son, blames his powers for killing his wife. Since then Zell lived with his grandmother in his home and after the death of his grandmother he lived alone. A moment when he had the idea of going to look for something to be able to eat then to play with his only two friends an unexpected passage between several dimensions appeared. One of his two friends was kidnapped by a kind of monster and it launched the adventure !
Primary Objective: End this madness and close this passage.
Yeah I know it's sounds like a cliché story like that but it's not ^^. Well I hope you can find a Name for this game !
This is a gif so it's not that good in quality:

Before I tell you a part of the story I have to say that the graphic is inspired from Earthbound/Mother !:
A boy named Zell, who is only 12 years old, had lost his mother at only 8 years old and his father, who is scientific and afraid of his son, blames his powers for killing his wife. Since then Zell lived with his grandmother in his home and after the death of his grandmother he lived alone. A moment when he had the idea of going to look for something to be able to eat then to play with his only two friends an unexpected passage between several dimensions appeared. One of his two friends was kidnapped by a kind of monster and it launched the adventure !
Primary Objective: End this madness and close this passage.
Yeah I know it's sounds like a cliché story like that but it's not ^^. Well I hope you can find a Name for this game !
This is a gif so it's not that good in quality:

You might want to leave the name of the game to be the literally last thing you do, so you can pick one that fits your game. If you pick one early you run the risk of the name stop fitting the game as it evolves. If you are out of ideas, you could always use some phrase or name from the game that holds special importance to the story.
Zell-o eats jello!
Pray tell, he's Zell
Zell and the Dimensional Hell
Pray tell, he's Zell
Zell and the Dimensional Hell
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
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Does the interdimensional passage have a name? If so, I would name the game after the passage. If not, I would give the passage a name, and then name the game after the passage.
Ideally a cool name like "Passage 6431J" or "The Transmittal Corridor" or "The Tripflow" or "The X Approach." Feel free to use any of those. Just don't make it something stupid like "Zell's Several Dimensions Road." And if you name the game "Zellbound" I will actually drive to your house and slap you.
Also, this is unrelated, but almost every line of dialogue in your gif has a typo in it, and some of them have more than one. The line about the mirror has five typos, and misspells "narcissistic" a different way than you spelled it 5 seconds earlier. All the text boses that aren't being said by Zell also have a blank line with a colon at the beginning. Fix it, fix it, fix it!
Ideally a cool name like "Passage 6431J" or "The Transmittal Corridor" or "The Tripflow" or "The X Approach." Feel free to use any of those. Just don't make it something stupid like "Zell's Several Dimensions Road." And if you name the game "Zellbound" I will actually drive to your house and slap you.
Also, this is unrelated, but almost every line of dialogue in your gif has a typo in it, and some of them have more than one. The line about the mirror has five typos, and misspells "narcissistic" a different way than you spelled it 5 seconds earlier. All the text boses that aren't being said by Zell also have a blank line with a colon at the beginning. Fix it, fix it, fix it!
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