SO I FOUND AN OLD UNFINISHED SCRIPT FOR A CASTLE OBLIVION FAN GAME.

So yeah I was digging around in my files and found this, I had wrote some of a script for a castle oblivion game at some point. Its horrible, trust me, but I figured why not post it and see everybody else rip it apart while lol. Go apeshit on it. (no I'm never going to make this game neither, if I had to guess the reason why I never finished is because I wanted to make something my own, my own IP and series)

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Opening
Map- Black
“Doth my mind deceive me?” - ???
“Or have I been trapped in a world, unlike my own?” - ???
“There has to be a way to escape, someway, somehow”- ????
Fade out
(flashback scene)
*Fade in to inside of a wood house.
Professor Gabe is sitting on his chair, with beer bottles on the table in front of him.
A knock on the door
A young man steps in
“Professor, we missed you in class today, is there something wrong?” – Young man
“No, nothing is wrong. I woke up to late that’s all” – Gabe
“Well, the dean said he will give your class a second chance today. There’s still time left, if you want to come finish the day” – Young man
“No, I can’t, I just can’t” –Gabe
“Okay professor….Is there anything you need?” –Young Man
“No” – Gabe
*The young man steps out of house.
*Gabe gets out of his chair
“I need to get out of here” – Gabe
*Player Control
*Bustling City map (Take the route to the north, into the forest)
*Forest map (Medium)
*Gabe comes out of forest into a big clearing. In the clearing is a castle.
Fade out
Show Title- Castle Oblivion Hallow Memories

Chapter 1
Gabe is inside castle

*Castle interior map medium, there’s a second floor with stairs that lead up to it, there’s multiple rooms inside of the castle.

“Weird, it seems pretty normal on the inside” – Gabe

Mysterious voice- “Oh baby this castle is more than just an ordinary castle”

Gabe gets a little confused
A mysterious man with red hair appears out of a flame

“Hello there, I see you found my pretty little castle” – Red haired man
“How- how did you do that?” – Gabe says shocked

“Do what?” - Red hair man

“That flame and then appearing like that, there has to be some scientific answer to it” – Gabe

“Well, aren’t you a smart one, don’t even compliment my castle will you. It’s a magic trick simple” – Red Hair man

“There’s no such thing as magic”- Gabe

“Oh boy, you have no idea, I’m going to tell you a secret” – Red Hair man

“This castle is magical, It only appears to the people it wants to, and it seems it has taken a liking to you” –Red Hair man

“That don’t even make sense” – Gabe

“How else would a castle appear out in the middle of the forest?” Red Hair Man

“I guess you have a point, but it surely wasn’t magic” – Gabe

“Stubborn too, well If I can’t convince you with words, then I shall with proof, follow me” – Red Hair man.