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Yeah, I already posted this on GamingW, but if anyone needs a composer, I'll serve that duty.
http://midishrine.com/midi/31696.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31697.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31707.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31698.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31699.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31700.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31701.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31702.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31703.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31704.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31705.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31708.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31696.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31697.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31707.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31698.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31699.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31700.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31701.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31702.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31703.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31704.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31705.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31708.mid
Your tracks are nothing more than random clicks in a midi editor. Ergo, it's shit.
Come back when you can offer us music.
(My most immediate complaint is the choice of instruments. Try changing those around and see what you get.)
Come back when you can offer us music.
(My most immediate complaint is the choice of instruments. Try changing those around and see what you get.)
Okay then.
Do what Chaos said and get better. Nobody will want custom music if they can get better stuff without the wait from commercial games.
Do what Chaos said and get better. Nobody will want custom music if they can get better stuff without the wait from commercial games.
I may be one of the best of here. Why would one want to steal music when they can have me be a slave over a stove for you. could someone message me at kittybabies1999@hotmail.com to discuss this please. I do need help and to compose for a sort.
The issue behind your service is that you're a self-admitted fresh composer. Most people here want experienced composers that know what they're doing.
I'd say the easiest way to learn just about anything is to emulate and example. I learned game balance from Shin Megami Tensei. Some pixalists learn spriting by studying other's work. Some artists learn by copying what they see.
Try looking up some game composers and listening to what they've done - both the obvious bigshots like Nobuo Uematsu and Shoji Meguro, and some the lesser-known composers like Dennis Martin. Once you've learned the basics into second nature, then deviate and make it your own.
I'd say the easiest way to learn just about anything is to emulate and example. I learned game balance from Shin Megami Tensei. Some pixalists learn spriting by studying other's work. Some artists learn by copying what they see.
Try looking up some game composers and listening to what they've done - both the obvious bigshots like Nobuo Uematsu and Shoji Meguro, and some the lesser-known composers like Dennis Martin. Once you've learned the basics into second nature, then deviate and make it your own.
I listened to all of the songs. I know there is talent under there, but I also understand the criticism. These aren't songs so much as lessons, and do not have the components needed to pass as a song. Song 3 is probably the only one that can stand on its own as a theme, and it's actually very good. If I had to guess, you're a music student.
Show us some of your more coherent works, full songs, and I think people might change their opinions.
Show us some of your more coherent works, full songs, and I think people might change their opinions.
I've listened to the songs, and I'll repeat what Chaos has said: They are nothing more than random notes on paper. The songs lack a sense of unity; as it stands I feel like I'm listening to random noise than actual music.
Judging by your enthusiasm, there is potential talent to be found. However, you first need to listen to all constructive criticism for that to happen.
For your sake, I'll also state I particularly dislike the rather inflated ego you've shown here, stating yourself as "may be one of the best", "why would one want to steal music not done by me" and flat out ignoring the first comment you ever received here as something less than what you ideally expected. People do not appreciate those who don't listen to constructive criticism, let alone one with an inflated ego.
Humble yourself, learn from the composers that have come before you, and then take another jab at this. Your intentions are well meant and we all understand that, but if you continue down this road you're currently on you will surely meet disaster.
Judging by your enthusiasm, there is potential talent to be found. However, you first need to listen to all constructive criticism for that to happen.
For your sake, I'll also state I particularly dislike the rather inflated ego you've shown here, stating yourself as "may be one of the best", "why would one want to steal music not done by me" and flat out ignoring the first comment you ever received here as something less than what you ideally expected. People do not appreciate those who don't listen to constructive criticism, let alone one with an inflated ego.
Humble yourself, learn from the composers that have come before you, and then take another jab at this. Your intentions are well meant and we all understand that, but if you continue down this road you're currently on you will surely meet disaster.
I know better than to call his music random notes on paper, but most of them are just experiments that do not have, what KingArthur calls, unity.
I didn't catch the ego until KA mentioned it, so I must state my agreement there. It's commendable for you to offer your services, but no one wants to help you pamper your confidence. I know you have talent, but you're certainly not the best =)
I didn't catch the ego until KA mentioned it, so I must state my agreement there. It's commendable for you to offer your services, but no one wants to help you pamper your confidence. I know you have talent, but you're certainly not the best =)
Hm. let's see...
-I'm desparate for music
-People doubt your skill
-You think you're great at this
...
Perhaps I could suggest a chance to prove yourself? Here Is a music request which I have put up and has yet to be noticed, possibly ignored due to my accidental spamming... (Purely accidental, people, I apologize deeply)
Why don't you try out a few of those songs? Start out with the remix, then if you believe your ready begin with the fresh works.
-I'm desparate for music
-People doubt your skill
-You think you're great at this
...
Perhaps I could suggest a chance to prove yourself? Here Is a music request which I have put up and has yet to be noticed, possibly ignored due to my accidental spamming... (Purely accidental, people, I apologize deeply)
Why don't you try out a few of those songs? Start out with the remix, then if you believe your ready begin with the fresh works.
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I may be one of the best of here.
no. ego the hell down and realize you have a lot of growing to do before you can call yourself a composer. as SFL said, the underlying talent is there somewhat, you're just not skilled enough in the actual execution yet to go around boasting like that. or at all.
Fine I will some of my other songs. These are not finished all of the way of course. I also consider of them, lesser quality than my other songs. Thank you.
http://midishrine.com/midi/31736.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31737.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31738.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31739.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31740.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31741.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31742.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31736.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31737.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31738.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31739.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31740.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31741.mid
http://midishrine.com/midi/31742.mid
Now THESE are songs. I don't want to get into why you think the stuff you posted earlier is better than these, but I have a feeling you know more than you're letting on.
This is the kind of stuff people can use for their games, and they are really quite good. I bet there are people here that can use one of these songs if it is finished.
You've proven that you're better than we all originally thought, but please try to keep a level head about it. Remember, people would love to have someone write music for them, but they don't want to have to stroke your ego to get it.
Keep it up =)
This is the kind of stuff people can use for their games, and they are really quite good. I bet there are people here that can use one of these songs if it is finished.
You've proven that you're better than we all originally thought, but please try to keep a level head about it. Remember, people would love to have someone write music for them, but they don't want to have to stroke your ego to get it.
Keep it up =)
I apologize, my brother told me that my songs are too unoriginal and that he liked my "avant garde" I believe that is what they call it? Thank you for your criticism of some of my music. I still would enjoy to compose for someone's game, if it is an interest of others. Thank you.
Those are much better! I could use music but the thing is, well... I'm in no place to be getting some right now. I have a lot of work to do before i get to it.
Maybe if you're still around by that time I'll ask you.
Maybe if you're still around by that time I'll ask you.
As I have posted before, I am always looking for a willing composer. I enjoyed listening to your second set of songs, and would like for you to compose for me.
Thank you.
EDIT: Oh yes, and may I use 31736, 31739, 31741 and 31742 when they are completed?
If so, many, many thanks.
Thank you.
EDIT: Oh yes, and may I use 31736, 31739, 31741 and 31742 when they are completed?
If so, many, many thanks.
I haven't listened to all of them, but I really like the first song in the second set that you posted.
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I apologize, my brother told me that my songs are too unoriginal and that he liked my "avant garde" I believe that is what they call it? Thank you for your criticism of some of my music. I still would enjoy to compose for someone's game, if it is an interest of others. Thank you.
Nothing wrong with avant garde (if that's your thing), but it doesn't align too well with providing atmosphere to games =)
















