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http://rpgmaker.net/users/RPGManiac3030/locker/Despair.mp3
The title is Despair, and it's in C minor. I composed it using Sibelius 6.
I mainly composed Despair for my high school orchestra, but since It's in my game I put it up here.
Does this sound like something you'd find in a game for a sad moment, emotional scene or something similar? I'm currently using Despair for the intro to Gio Adventures. Regardless if it is or isn't I'm probably going to conduct this for our next concert. I think that it is completed, but there might be something I could add(At least for the game).
Comments/concerns/questions/dislikes would be appreciated.
NOTE: You may need to turn your sound all the way up to hear it best.
Oh, and please don't download it. Thanks.
The title is Despair, and it's in C minor. I composed it using Sibelius 6.
I mainly composed Despair for my high school orchestra, but since It's in my game I put it up here.
Does this sound like something you'd find in a game for a sad moment, emotional scene or something similar? I'm currently using Despair for the intro to Gio Adventures. Regardless if it is or isn't I'm probably going to conduct this for our next concert. I think that it is completed, but there might be something I could add(At least for the game).
Comments/concerns/questions/
NOTE: You may need to turn your sound all the way up to hear it best.
Oh, and please don't download it. Thanks.
I edited Despair a little and I've added another song called Light in the Dark
http://rpgmaker.net/users/RPGManiac3030/locker/Light_in_the_Dark.mp3
http://rpgmaker.net/users/RPGManiac3030/locker/Light_in_the_Dark.mp3
1st song: Hmm, it sounds good, but I get the same feeling throughout the whole song. I'm not moved by it much. More melody would be nice.
2nd song: This one moves me more, not sure what to say about it. This peach is keeping me very occupied, so once I'm done with this, I'll get back to you if I got something.
Above all, good job. Well done.
2nd song: This one moves me more, not sure what to say about it. This peach is keeping me very occupied, so once I'm done with this, I'll get back to you if I got something.
Above all, good job. Well done.
I'm trying to add a new melody to the first one, but I'm having a hard time of where to place it without majorly re-writing the entire piece. And since it's in 3/4, that makes it a little harder since most of the melodies I came up with were in 4/4...
I could barely even hear anything and opening it in audacity showed my why. Your volume is horrendously low.
The link just goes to your locker. And that's nothing, I use DirectMusic Producer and I think it would be easier to learn how to fly a space shuttle. It does everything you can think of in music though.. it even has a built-in music composing AI somewhere, according to the documents from Microsoft.
WolfCoder, I think there was a problem with the site because they're working fine now, at least they are on mine.
EDIT: I also need a new name for the second song, Light in the Dark. I think it sounds corny/lame as it is. Anyone have suggestions?
EDIT: I also need a new name for the second song, Light in the Dark. I think it sounds corny/lame as it is. Anyone have suggestions?
The beginning of "despair" sounds very emotional to me. It reminds me of a movie. I think your songs are beautiful. Congratulations!
http://rpgmaker.net/users/RPGManiac3030/locker/Despair_Alternate.mp3
This is an edited version of Despair. There is just one new section in the middle, and it's in 4/4. Does it fit with the rest of the piece?
This is an edited version of Despair. There is just one new section in the middle, and it's in 4/4. Does it fit with the rest of the piece?
author=RPGManiac3030
http://rpgmaker.net/users/RPGManiac3030/locker/Echoes.mp3A new canon I wrote
This is nice, I think it's better than Despair. If you're looking to change any of it, you could consider changing your chord structure at some point. You stay on Aminor the entire time. An easy place would be to go to Fmajor at the 1:00 mark for a little bit, keeping the same material, just transposed.
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