COLLEGE ASSIGNMENT - IDEAS GENERATION - NEED FEEDBACK

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Survey click here...Hi to anyone reading this I am a college student and for one of my assignments I have to come up with two game ideas, if you can spare a few mins to click the link and fill out the survey it'd be much appreciated as I really need some good audience feedback to get a good grade many thanks in advance
Done.

Dark blue font against black background is hard to read, though.
thanks for the input took on board your sugestions for the proposal and storyline, will change the questionaire now to make it easier to read.
Much better layout. :)
I though my suggestions would be anonymous. :(
author=calunio
Much better layout. :)
I though my suggestions would be anonymous. :(


lol the suggestions are anonymous...I have no idea who you are :p
Would like to thank everyone for the help so far, I will be updating the survey as I get further through my assignment so if you would like to see how your input affects my work then check in on this thread every now and then
OK so I have had a few comments on my survey that have mentioned gameplay specifics, I will be adding these at a later date, the proposal and storyline are merely brief overviews as the idea is literally a few days old, as I progress with this assignment I will be adding further details on the game aesthetics, structure, gameplay, concept art etc I am currently researching further into the content of the game, this is the first time I have had to work on a games concept so please try not to be too harsh on me :)
Are you actually working on producing this game? Or is this purely conceptual?
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
5958
He just said the idea is literally a few days old, and he has a survey up to help him decide whether to use his ideas or not. I'm pretty sure that's as "purely conceptual" as you can get.
hello again, sorry for the lack of replies on my part but I've been working my ass off trying to get this assignment done. I now have an updated ideas file, although it is not quite finished, it does cover enough ground for me to complete my college assignment. It is now quite legnthy and detailed, with inclusions of character specifics, game play, a little concept art and more.

Just to clarify as there seems to have been a little confusion in my abscence, what I am creating here is an ideas file to be handed in as a college assignment. I must then pitch this idea to my tutors, in the same manner as you would pitch your idea to a games development company if you worked for them. All the work you see is not likely to go further than the concept stage. As much as I would like this game to be made I do not have £40 million lying around create it but if anyone is feeling generous I'm more than open to offers lol.

Anyhow if anyone has some time to spare I would much appreciate some feedback on my ideas. I have done my best to make amendments following the audience survey (see beginning of thread)and I hope you like what you see. Please bear in mind that I have converted this file from office word 2010 to goggle docs so the layout may be a little messed up. click the following link to view the idea file click here to view file

Many thanks to all who have contributed their feedback. I have really enjoyed working on this idea so I will be updating it even after my assignment has been handed in. feel free to leave your opinions on this thread or If anyone has any in-depth comments or you wish your feedback to remain anonymous then you can email me at:

herbalgerbil@blueyonder.co.uk

many thanks again and have a nice day :)
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