Updated the screen shots thanks to the wonderful pointers given to me by Little Wing Guy and Mary4D. Mary 4D's suggestion looks much more epic than what I have (I really like that text box!), but I like what I came up with.
I've also updated the download to reflect the graphical overhaul of the school, but I'm not quite sure about the dungeon mapping I have at the moment.
Fortunately, I'm still hammering out what, exactly, I want to happen in Chapter 2, so if there's any other suggestions or comments, I'd like to see them!