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Nines- Added: 08/20/2010 05:01 AM
- Last updated: 12/26/2024 01:42 PM
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CloseAwesome. That guy's head is a bit weird shaped though. To look normal, it shouldn't be so oval from the top. Though if he's supposed to look egg head, then yeah... =P
About the woman, I love her expression but the facial features are kinda off the perspective. Her cheek bones give the assumption she is facing the viewer, but the chin and eyes are aligned so that her head is tilted to her left. I'd just try to correct it by rotating her eyes/nose/mouth section all together a few degrees to the left OR maybe trying to smoothen the curve on right side of her face and move it towards right (from viewpoint). To make it look more round and less flat in sort of way, so it gives more well the idea that her head is turning a bit to her left.
Edit: Added picture got get my point across. I also noticed the hairline might need to be adjusted if you want that female character to look at the direction she's looking at.
About the woman, I love her expression but the facial features are kinda off the perspective. Her cheek bones give the assumption she is facing the viewer, but the chin and eyes are aligned so that her head is tilted to her left. I'd just try to correct it by rotating her eyes/nose/mouth section all together a few degrees to the left OR maybe trying to smoothen the curve on right side of her face and move it towards right (from viewpoint). To make it look more round and less flat in sort of way, so it gives more well the idea that her head is turning a bit to her left.
Edit: Added picture got get my point across. I also noticed the hairline might need to be adjusted if you want that female character to look at the direction she's looking at.
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Thanks for the feedback! I didn't really notice those bits of weird in the pictures. I'll probably just fix it (and a few other things I'll inevitably find) once I get my stylus up and running again and work on the final versions.
It's been about 10 years since I really attempted this kind of art, so I'm a bit rusty :P You don't even want to see the first few versions of these guys I did, LOL.
It's been about 10 years since I really attempted this kind of art, so I'm a bit rusty :P You don't even want to see the first few versions of these guys I did, LOL.
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