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Flashback Scene
  • hanzokimura
  • Added: 10/16/2010 07:15 AM
  • Last updated: 12/28/2024 07:21 AM
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Excellent!³
The swords look kinda weird.
Plus, maybe you should add blood on the mountain rock things? Other than that, pretty good, Hanzo. ^_^
KingArthur
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The rocky outcroppings look out-of-scale to me, they look more like mountains one would find on a world map. I'm thinking it's their pointy tops that give that impression.

I am also not sure why the outcroppings are "fading" in upwards from the ground. Everything else is defined with distinct outlines. I thought it was just particularly heavy and thick snow, but then that view skews everything else very badly.

EDIT: Is that even snow? ;_;
I think its sand on a beach or something....

Also, a few water puddles should have blood in them, all those puddles and all that blood, and not a single red puddle? Especially the one with the sword sticking out of it.

I personally like how the sand is "hugging" the side of those rocks and makes the fade effect at the bottom.
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