Withered Reason - Demo 2

So after careful review (me playing through Withered Reason and realizing something was missing) the decision has been made to make the current starting point of Withered Reason a later event. I feel that beginning the game properly is the best decision I could make for the game. Besides, being at the height of my game design ability, creating a strong opening to the game and properly introducing the characters would give Withered Reason a completely different feel.

Tell me what you think, what would you suggest to contribute to the evolution of Withered Reason?