Fate's Hand: Titan's of Death

This product is in development and is being put on here for advice.
I want to know what people think and see what I can learn from peoples advice.
The game is not perfect and is in need of work.
The grammer needs work but I find it's alright.
I want to know what people think and what needs to be done.
The plot is about collect a few objects I know how cliche.

It's so you can defeat a Titan or demon who reeks havoc.
But they need to weaken it first.
Anyway I need help just to see what people think and that I hope to expand Rpg Making.
There are lots out there and thats good, much better than mine.
I just hope I can get constructive feedback and see how my game goes.
Its non- commercial so it's not for sale and all it's rights belong to those who have it.