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author=Chaos17
@AshMichaelis :Thank you very much for the video.
Live reactions are good for me to understand the player point of view.
It seems that I need to change : kuro dialog and description
I will make tutorials when I will work on the story version of the game.
Edit : if you don't mind, I added your video in the media section ;)
No problem! I've never made a game, but I know how live reactions help you see more flaws etc. And plus it gives another outlet to expand your games influence. I always try to make videos for newly released games because not only doesn't it benefit me to have more content, but it benefits the maker because it's like free advertising plus they get feedback. It's a really great game as previously stated. Keep up all the good work.
Chibi Dungeon
All in all I love the game. Its super cute etc. My only problem is that it took a lot of playing around to figure out what to do. Some sort of implemented tutorial might be cool. Otherwise it's great. Like Gamegeek101 said, my only complaint is that Kuro blocks heals which got a bit frustrating. That should be easily fixable though, and honestly its pretty easy to work around that. Keep up the good work! If you're interested, I'm recording a playthrough of the game because I thought it looked great :)
**Edit** OH and totally forgot. There was one line that made no sense. Its when you talk to Kuro for the first time. I dont remember the exact line now, though.
**Edit** OH and totally forgot. There was one line that made no sense. Its when you talk to Kuro for the first time. I dont remember the exact line now, though.
Träumerei
author=Nedras
Hey Veynn! Good to see that you've posted the demo. The art is really great and the maps are nicely made! Noel is a nice character. I actually smiled at a couple of his lines because his personality is really like that of kuuderes and I enjoyed him overall.
The atmosphere was really nice. I liked the change of the atmosphere after a certain event. After the event though, and the thing after that (trying to avoid spoilers) is that the end of the demo? It left me sort of confused. But it is just a demo, so I'm sure there will be more it unless I missed something.
I do have some critique for the game though.1. As soon as I started playing the first thing that I noticed was the idle animation. The sprite looks great when walking, however it immediately turns into awkward when you stop walking. I'm really unsure why you used this animation in contrast to this one.
Another issue I did find was that if Noel walks down there is a small black dash on the top right. This can be easily fixed though.
2. I'm not sure if this is just me, but I think the window clashes with text. The window is really dark, however, I think if you lightened it up a bit, or even just made the text bigger, the issue would be fixed.
3. The space is really limited the first map. I couldn't understand why I wasn't able to walk behind the pillows even though there was a clear walk way. Also Noel is standing on a chair in one of the paths.
Other than those things I pointed out, I think that what you're making right now definitely has potential! I look forward to the full game!
So I was making a recording for my youtube. I had to try a second time because I messed up the audio. There is a scene where it specifically tells you that you have finished the demo. I totally missed it the first time around.
**Spoiler**
Go to sleep in your bed after dealing with Mr. Magpie for it to say the demo is over.
Träumerei
author=Veynnauthor=AshMichaelisOdd; I just tested it out and the same thing's happening to me. Thank you for informing me; I'll try reuploading it!!
Soooo I'm trying to download the demo. It download but I cant open it. Not sure if its just me or what.
Is anyone else also having trouble with uploading the demo file?
It is working now! Awesome sauce. I'm super excited. Time to do a short let's play for youtube :3
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