CHELL'S PROFILE

Woah, first of all, thank you so much for this review! Really surprised again;; it was very insightful, great in pointing my mistakes - which I'd love to correct for the bigger project I'm working on - and I really laughed with some of your comments, so thank you! :')
Sorry I didn't really get what you meant by scale, though - do you mean how short it is? Actually, I have to agree with that.

I hadn't noticed the dialogue mistake at all;; I'll definitely post a revised version later, thank you so much!
As for the sfx, I could've gone for cartoonish, but since it was mostly "a bad day", I thought the more realistic/"creepy" sounds would amount for a nice effect. I'm sorry it scared you, though!;;

The events are.... quite literal I think. I mean, it's supposed to be a diary, only you - the player - can't access some pages until Totti recalls what happened on certain circumstances. You can get the Ryan endings depending on how much you interact with objects and in which order, all of which subsequently affects which diary pages are presented and, with that, which ending you'll get.
(A curiosity - although the Totti ending is easier to get (and the first one I did in game format, too) technically the sad hospital ending would be the 'canon' one.)

I can definitely see what you mean. As for why Sammy was easier to get into bed, I guess he was tired since it was late! *laughs* Okay, he isn't that bad; Just brattier than the other boys around, I guess. Maybe he's just young.


Well then. Once again, thank you so much for reviewing 1DP, and have a nice day!! (◡‿◡✿)