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Everything here looks amazing. Well done.

Jump into Javascript part 1

Ah, java... how you give me bad headaches.

Good tutorial! I enjoyed reading.

Prom Dreams: A High School Love Story

Going to try this out today. I'll make sure to write my thoughts when I'm finished.

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I'm really digging the maps.

Escape from Ritova's Mansion

Looks dope. I liked Eliza's story in Heartache 101, so I look forward to this.

EDIT: I played it and got ending one and two. Around forty minutes game time. I think it has heart but it definitely needs some polishing, but given you only had a month I think you did well. Props to you since it's also your first game.

My advice: You can only go up from here. Keep making games! I look forward to your future stuff.

Seven Mysteries: The Last Page

author=sanggameboy
Let's wait for this remake version because it's gonna be 70% different from the original ver. xD

That's really awesome to hear! I thought the first one had promise, but the story was really confusing and the characters weren't as fleshed out as I would've thought they'd be. The mapping is still really good.

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Damn, that looks awesome.

The Doctrine of Perseverance

Wow! Thank you so much for writing this out! I really appreciate it! Some responses...

author=Dragnfly
an open book is her stepmother's diary from all the way by the door? Isn't that, like 4 meters away if the bed is any measure. The kid has eyes like a hawk.

I tried to make the book glow so it would stand out which was why Melrose noticed it. But, I definitely understand where you're coming from.

author=Dragnfly
Getting out of the first room, when I started seeing directions mentioned I thought it was going to lead me to some hidden point but there was no starting point to go off of. Then I noticed that We See is made of the of letters from the directions so I checked the W, E, S, E, and E objects but got nothing. So I just plodded around the room actioning everywhere and found the correct spot (the glue too). I don't know how I was to find it otherwise since the obvious hint didn't turn out. Too bad because that would've been a great puzzle.

In order to finish the puzzle you stand right in front of the "We See" writing and go west, east, south, east, and east again. The W S N E tags in the room are hints in which direction the room is.

author=Dragnfly
or the second locked room escape puzzle, I knew the calendar was the hint. The progression starts in March and I'm already given the number 19. I need a 4-digit code. So I added 3+2+9+6=20. So I figured the code was 1920. That didn't work. So I tried 6156 (19x3x2x9x6, which amazingly gave a 4 digit number) and that didn't work. So I cycled it around a bunch. None of that worked so I tried random numbers while re-thinking how it could work and on the 4th or 5th try it just opened. I don't even remember what number opened it but I'm guessing it was those months and the 19 in some order.

For the calender puzzle the circle is in March, then goes to February, then September, and lastly June. So that would make the number 3296. The 19 part was suppose to represent the year, sorry for the confusion.

author=Dragnfly
Also, in this room, what was up with the chest by the door? I didn't get what freaked her out so much.

There's a pounding noise that comes from the chest, which scares her. Hopefully the BGM isn't too loud and is masking it. ; ;

author=Dragnfly
Key Puzzle + Chase Scene

Yeah, I agree a hundred percent on what you're saying with the chase scene part. It was really bad, and I edited it to make her slower in the next build. It was pretty aeful paired with the key room before it because of the randomization and then the random surprise. I'll add the 5 seconds to the timer as well!

Also! For the one spelling error with the unliving one line, I actually corrected that (saw it in a playthrough), as for the weird English, that does sound a lot better! I'll change it.

Thank you for taking the time to write this. I really appreciate it when people write stuff like this because it helps tremendously. Hopefully the full experience will be better! :D

Small edit:

author=Dragnfly
Also, just saying but I love Melrose's angry face. It looks like she's gonna axe murder somebody.

I dunno if you watch Higurashi or not, but they have some crazy deformed faces which really show crazy insanity so I take a lil pit of inspiration from that art style when some of my characters go a bit loony. Examples...

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