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Hey all. I'm attempting to post my RPG game. Shadows. On this sight. But its says I need to work on my Description. Could I gat a few pointers. Here is what I got so far.

"Shadows is a Sci Fi adventure game about a lost man with a dark and tragic past.

Do to an incident that drove him out of his mind. Dugan finds himself in a Crazy world surrounded by danger and mystery. A world he feels he must burn! Until he meets a young girl by the name of Karla Nelson. Who softens his black heart and gives Dugan a new meaning to his life

The game is still in the making. just the first level of the game is complete. As i'm still working on the rest.

I have worked hard on making this a family friendly game. Although the story line can be dark and tragic given Dugan was driven to insanity by it

I will update everyone when a new chapter is added. But right now. Only Chapter 1 is playable "